I think I know photoshop well, but I always use it to make my own artworks and it's my first wallpaper after all so...
At the beginning check on background was larger but I reduced it because I'd tought that it looks more spacious in this way... I know, it's simple, but I like it. Also, it's pink and I don't like pink but somehow I feel that it MUST be pink xD

How do you think?


Lulu&Suzaku wallpaper

It's good.

The wallpaper, resolution and the quality is good too. though the reso of the wall seems off in my monitor (since im still using a 21 - inch CRT monitor, not widescreen. )

the color pink is good with it. though the i don't like the mark thing on the lower left of the wall. and also you need a signature as proof that you are the one who made this wall.

Good luck on your submission!

I really don't like the pink outline you add around the characters. For me it's really not needed here.

As for the quality of the work it's pretty good indeed although the left character looks a little bit grainy on his costume...

The red band on the bottom of the wall looks a little too much or maybe just too red? I don't know. It drags attention from the subject and it's not really fitting the wall.

I can see your sign but it's pretty messy looking there... Maybe you should put on the other side.

Can't you move the characters a little more on the left? I guess you placed them like that cause you had no choice... But for me it would make more sense if they were a little more in the middle. They look like a little too much on the side and too much on each other that way...

About the background I just wonder why you cut the wall with that line made of squares... It's a little strange to me so I'm just asking. :-)

Good luck.

I think it's quite well done
though i have a few suggestions.
the red banner at the bottom there,
i think it would look better if it was thicker, and covered with text instead of a word or two here and there

It's good enough quality, although it is a bit grainy in some areas, like Lulu's hair and coat. And it could also be my screen, but Lulu's coat is a bit discoloured. The checkered bar dividing part of the background is a bit strange, and I don't believe that it is boring to just have one pattern in the background. :)

For that red bar that everyone's complaining about, I would say, just take it out and try moving the characters more to the left. If it doesn't look right, then I would suggest what kuryuki said to make the text wider and thicker and perhaps change the color to a less distracting color. I think it is perfectly fine to use pink or lavender for the color of the bar! INDEED, IT MUST BE PINK. XD

I hope you put up your new and improved wallpaper up for us to see soon!

First thanks for suggestions :)

And now I explain myself :D

1. Red band. I didn't' want to blend it with background so I make it in strong colour (oposite to rather pale background). Everyone complain about this so it was not good idea... I'll try with more pale color or just delete it...

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zazou8888

the left character looks a little bit grainy on his costume...

Fawna

it is a bit grainy in some areas, like Lulu's hair and coat

Ok, I try to improve it :)

3.

zazou8888

move the characters a little more on the left?

Well, I can draw missing parts (on this picture its rather simple) and move it to more left but... I like rather asymmetry composition and this its more practical for me because on my desktop icons are suitated on left and I didn't want them to cover picture ;P But because others also finds it better in your way, I'll change this :)

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zazou8888

why you cut the wall with that line made of squares

Background. I didn't cover all background with check because... I thought it will be boring ;P Besides, in my opinion characters will be more legible.

Heh, I think I must to do some work in my signature too ;P

Ok, I update next version soon... Thanks a lot for all suggestions (once more :D)

Quite good for your 1st try. The pink stroke/outline outside the character doesn't fit(I have different taste), unless you like it. Anyone I Give it at 8/10 Rating. xD

Maybe you should try to change the pink outline
:D shrinking it down a bit might not be a bad idea