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Relaxation by °Tens  11 hours 51 minutes  ago

Relaxation by °Tens 11 hours 51 minutes ago

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As an animation, Bakemonogatari has a simple, clean art style. But the guest illustrations for the series are anything but simple! So, it's great to see that °Tens took on a more complex illustration and made it his own with vector gradients so fine at points it more resembles painting that vectoring. Do have a look at this beautiful wallpaper!

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~NosVII 1 minute ago
And what if the suspect runs off and leaves the car behind

$Loftydreamer 3 minutes ago
We should just give police satellite access. Let the criminal go rest some place and storm the building. Rather than 3 tons of car barreling around the streets at 100 mph with an unskilled driver behind the wheel.

~NosVII 4 minutes ago
Just throw in some spikestrips and some trucks to block of the road

$Loftydreamer 5 minutes ago
You know when helicopters and SWAT teams aren't enough...Are car chases necessary? Maybe for some criminals, but most of the car chases are by stupid and scared people. Why not just send a helicopter up and start diverting traffic?

~Loleta 10 minutes ago
...........................

$Loftydreamer 10 minutes ago
Gotta love the need for the police to have a car that goes 200MPH.

~NosVII 11 minutes ago
Reminds me of NFS :D

:3CloudGer 16 minutes ago
What a waste

$Loftydreamer 19 minutes ago

:3CloudGer 38 minutes ago
Lol xD we'll see if I share your attitude after I started watching

Just for Fun!! [1st time making WP]

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~prettisnow
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3 months 1 day ago
Well i was looking around the forum and see that this categories is interesting, so i also wanted to post one myself
lol
anyway this is something i just finish and dont really planning to submit since i know it doesnt look good anyway but i would like someone to tell me how it is so i can improve a bit more of my skill, and please know [This is my first time making wallpaper so i know is bad]
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^angel-voice
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3 months 22 hours ago
Well, first some major points:

1. The resolution is wrong. I suggest taking a look into the guide.
2. Wrong file format. We only accept .jpeg

About the wall itself there are several improvements you need to do.
I'm not really sure what you exactly made here but it looks like you have taken a scan and blurred parts of it. To be sure it would be good to take a look at the original scan.

The background needs improvement too. What needs to be done is up to you. It depends if you're going to make an abstract background or a scenic. Looking at the scan I would go with a scenic background but these are not easy to make. The extraction of the scan also needs improvement. Especially on her head the lines are to jaggy and not very good cut.

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`kuryuki
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3 months 16 hours ago
Yup like voicie said wrong reso and format
other than that though:
i quite like your background.
with the glows and lights >D

though i really do think the extracting could use some more work
i'm guessing you probably done it with magic wand or something.
I suggest you go to EDD! to see their tutorial

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~prettisnow
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3 months 9 hours ago
Well i did said that i am only doing it for fun and not planning to submit this one
and to kuryuki, i dont use magic wand for my wallpaper

and if you want to see the original then here it is
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`kuryuki
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3 months 8 hours ago
...no my point is that the extracted edges are pretty noisy...

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^angel-voice
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2 months 4 weeks ago
Well i did said that i am only doing it for fun and not planning to submit this one


Well, ok than I don't will give any more advices on how to improve your work. It seems to me that you don't wanna take them at least and work on your wallpaper.
I don't wanna be rude but Session Zero is for wallers who want to improve their works to submit them here. If you don't want to submit your work that's ok but at least you can take the advices the members here are willing to give.