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Barragan Graffiti
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I won't even pretend that I've read/watched Barragan but I can give an opinion on your wall.
Firstly the background looks like you didn't put much effort or thought into it (although that most probably isn't true), and the colour of the wall overpowers the 'graffiti'. The wall would look better a different colour like grey stone, or scuffing/aging the wall.
I personally think that there isn't a solid focal point on the wall (where the eye is drawn to first) and perhaps the inclusion of a scan/character would improve the overall look of the wall. Then the graffiti would frame/emphasis the character in the wall (would suggest a badass/evil/villian character out of the series).
Also your 'paint' colours need to be more dramatic and solid against the colour of the wall like dark blues/black/reds/browns and greens that would stand out and leave an impression.
Reorganising your layout may help to improve the wall. Or perhaps even enlarging the central skull.
But I do like the font you have used for your title. I look forward to reviewing your next wall version.
Firstly the background looks like you didn't put much effort or thought into it (although that most probably isn't true), and the colour of the wall overpowers the 'graffiti'. The wall would look better a different colour like grey stone, or scuffing/aging the wall.
I personally think that there isn't a solid focal point on the wall (where the eye is drawn to first) and perhaps the inclusion of a scan/character would improve the overall look of the wall. Then the graffiti would frame/emphasis the character in the wall (would suggest a badass/evil/villian character out of the series).
Also your 'paint' colours need to be more dramatic and solid against the colour of the wall like dark blues/black/reds/browns and greens that would stand out and leave an impression.
Reorganising your layout may help to improve the wall. Or perhaps even enlarging the central skull.
But I do like the font you have used for your title. I look forward to reviewing your next wall version.
2 months 1 week ago
Hm.. i think the choice of colours can be done so that they are brighter and contrast more to bring out vibrancy in the wall...
Ive never read or seen this so I dont know much about it. But if you are trying to portray graffiti on the wall than they should stand out more. They look kinda faded out and not painted on at all. Keep working with it. Good luck! 
If you're looking at Barragan from Bleach (I assume you are because of the "I'm God"), I would suggest you put his picture on the wall instead of just a skull, because it seems rather unrecognizable to me. Colours also need to be more vibrant because they don't stand out at the moment. Perhaps you might want to find a stock picture of a brick wall or something, because it's quite obvious the wall is computer-generated (takes away that sense of realism).
But overall good job with the choice of fonts. I also love the little bits of extra graffiti :)
But overall good job with the choice of fonts. I also love the little bits of extra graffiti :)
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