Zero In Sinner
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Ok Bro. the idea is very good, I think you should fix you attention on the personges, I see a lack of fusion, but this is easily solved, the font should be more clear.
Anyway good job.
Gretings of DVno.
Anyway good job.
Gretings of DVno.
2 weeks 5 days ago
ARGL I was commenting on this wall and my computer turned off the power !! damn technology!
ANYWAY...
So basically here are the infos in a shorter therm...
Let's be nice for once! :p
1) the extraction needs some work. You have too much leftovers from the original scan around the characters. You should also remove the space under the chair cause it doesn't fit with the actual background of the wallpaper.
2) Your scan as it's a manga scan looks a little low quality. It can happen if you stretch or resize the picture or if you scanned it with a low resolution (better try the 200 or 300 dpi). If it's your scan, I would recommend to rescan it with 300 dpi and ask for a end process product with a 60 or 70% of the size so it can fit your picture.
If it's not your scan and you don't have the original to scan. I would rather recommend to clean the picture. How? With that site it can be easier http://cornerofart.webs.com/resources/tutorials/basicscancleaning.html
If you still can get the thing right, you can search a tutorial on Google.
3) Repeat the characters in the background is almost always a bad idea... it's just like if you couldn't find any other way to avoid blanc spaces and the moderators don't really like that...
4) The text is pretty cool but the font of the 3 first lines is a little too casual... You should try for some more interesting fonts. You can find some really neat ones on www.dafont.com
The Zero in is cool looking but isn't really readable cause it's too dark on a dark background. You can correct that easily by making the text a little more saturated, making it lighter or make the background lighter... You need to try and choose the solution you like better.
5) the splatter brush and the style of your wallpaper is cool. I like the way you placed everything. My only complain would go to the small size of the wallpaper itself... Cause now it's pretty rare a screen so small and the bigger it is the more you can place icons on! :p ^^
6) Last but not least. Are you sure you want your personal address as sing? I would rather consider putting your url on AP better than your address... Just as confidential thing... You never know! :)
Hope this isn't too long and doesn't sound too hard for you. I try to be constructive but sometimes I get a little hard on new wallers... :-s But I don't bite! ^^
Don't hesitate to post your updates here and if you want me to check out your updates wallpaper or some infos about stuff I'm talking about up here, don't hesitate to send me a message! :-)
Have fun and good luck!
ANYWAY...
So basically here are the infos in a shorter therm...
Let's be nice for once! :p
1) the extraction needs some work. You have too much leftovers from the original scan around the characters. You should also remove the space under the chair cause it doesn't fit with the actual background of the wallpaper.
2) Your scan as it's a manga scan looks a little low quality. It can happen if you stretch or resize the picture or if you scanned it with a low resolution (better try the 200 or 300 dpi). If it's your scan, I would recommend to rescan it with 300 dpi and ask for a end process product with a 60 or 70% of the size so it can fit your picture.
If it's not your scan and you don't have the original to scan. I would rather recommend to clean the picture. How? With that site it can be easier http://cornerofart.webs.com/resources/tutorials/basicscancleaning.html
If you still can get the thing right, you can search a tutorial on Google.
3) Repeat the characters in the background is almost always a bad idea... it's just like if you couldn't find any other way to avoid blanc spaces and the moderators don't really like that...
4) The text is pretty cool but the font of the 3 first lines is a little too casual... You should try for some more interesting fonts. You can find some really neat ones on www.dafont.com
The Zero in is cool looking but isn't really readable cause it's too dark on a dark background. You can correct that easily by making the text a little more saturated, making it lighter or make the background lighter... You need to try and choose the solution you like better.
5) the splatter brush and the style of your wallpaper is cool. I like the way you placed everything. My only complain would go to the small size of the wallpaper itself... Cause now it's pretty rare a screen so small and the bigger it is the more you can place icons on! :p ^^
6) Last but not least. Are you sure you want your personal address as sing? I would rather consider putting your url on AP better than your address... Just as confidential thing... You never know! :)
Hope this isn't too long and doesn't sound too hard for you. I try to be constructive but sometimes I get a little hard on new wallers... :-s But I don't bite! ^^
Don't hesitate to post your updates here and if you want me to check out your updates wallpaper or some infos about stuff I'm talking about up here, don't hesitate to send me a message! :-)
Have fun and good luck!
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