Updated my paper and wanted some feedback please.
Do the fonts work?
If not, do you have any suggestions as to some better fonts?
Are the words too much? I personally love text in on wallpapers, but I want some other opinions.

Wallpaper

Mmm,

I already commented on this wall:

"I agree with Akiranyo,

The image of the the two men is cropped, and the man on the left side has some of his knees and shoes cut off. It would be killer if you could vector this scan.

I actually really like the bg and its composition; the arrows and text and colors you used make a nice looking wall. You may want to add more textures or a subtle pattern to the tan bg, so that the tan part is not so plain.

Good luck."

The text is not an issue for me. You need to work on finding a high quality scan, or go back and vector this scan so that the knees of your characters aren't cut off.
The bg, as I stated above, has a nice composition, so work on the scan part for now.


Good luck.

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Yea you can vectorize Kamina & Simon 0:
and i just think that the message on the background, [i remember that part on the anime, it was sooo great!] but do you think Kamina & SImon meditating gives that message? just asking hehe.

If you don't know how to vector dont' botter doing so much work for such a few little lines missing... Just draw that missing part of the shoe! It's not that hard and especially when the scan is in the hand-drawing style! You can also complete his knees...

If you got confident with that redrawing of a part you can also finish the shoe of the second character and then place them more on the left so the little guy doesn't look too much like if he was punished in the corner like little bad boys! :)

I think the text isn't a problem but the font could be more interesting like more in the "high tech" feeling as the wallpaper looks. Arrows, digital circle design... All that gives a technical and hight tech feeling... So should be the text if you ask me...

I agree with FlameColonelRoy you should add some more pattern and details to your background layer...

Anyway good work so far and don't hesitate to post your updates here so we can follow you're evolution easily :)

Have fun walling! ^^

Yes I quote everyone you should pay attention about the images, but the composition is rather interesting.