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Final Fantasy X2 Wallpaper
3 years 2 months ago
Didn't that wallpaper get through :S Its so gorgeous! lol
The 3 girls in the back fading it need ssome extracting help i believe you cand find those pictures extracted somewhere
Ok, I think I can do that alone
Mmmh... you should work more your background, coz a blue background + photoshops clouds brushes won't be accepted.
The quality of your scans are good. :)
You should try to work more on your wall, it's not only a cut/copy of 4-5 scans... :/
good luck :)
The quality of your scans are good. :)
You should try to work more on your wall, it's not only a cut/copy of 4-5 scans... :/
good luck :)
Hold up a moment! there are way too many scans used--i know they all look nice yes, but you have to settle for fewer because right now, there's too put to look at and no key focus anywhere, just three triplet sets of scans on a blue sky bg. that's not going to work. remove the girls floating in the sky, i'd say.
a second thing: why's there a white light thingie in the middle of the wall? it looks out of place
a third thing: i know you tried blending the ground the girls are standing on into the sky but despite your efforts to make it gradual, I can still see the cut off of the ground pic in a straight line near the bottom of the wall--not something you want to be visible.
a fourth thing: you most likely have the potential to make the clouds look more breath-taking than that. go for some better stock. but in case you don't want to, the sky looks acceptable as it is, just that it can be better.
a final thing: this looks nice--but you can improve it! good luck.
a second thing: why's there a white light thingie in the middle of the wall? it looks out of place
a third thing: i know you tried blending the ground the girls are standing on into the sky but despite your efforts to make it gradual, I can still see the cut off of the ground pic in a straight line near the bottom of the wall--not something you want to be visible.
a fourth thing: you most likely have the potential to make the clouds look more breath-taking than that. go for some better stock. but in case you don't want to, the sky looks acceptable as it is, just that it can be better.
a final thing: this looks nice--but you can improve it! good luck.
Okay, thanks for your advices
So, this is the result of my work :
HERE !!
I try to draw the wing of the bird, and I think the operation is a success ^^
So, this is the result of my work :
HERE !!
I try to draw the wing of the bird, and I think the operation is a success ^^
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The bird is acceptable, good job on that, but what's that mass of squiggly stuff o_o
It's for the style LoooOooL You don't like this ? xD
No, seriously, I make that because I don't know what can be beautiful, so I try some thing ...
No, seriously, I make that because I don't know what can be beautiful, so I try some thing ...
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I'm sorry but the squigglies are kinda out of place... if you're going for beautiful, you're not on the exactly right path ^^; xP puffy clouds, flying birds maybe? i still think your clouds are rather flat.
3 years 2 months ago
It's a pretty nice start, i really like that you focused on one scan. they look pretty cool. extraction is nice and for the most part the scan looks clean enough. i'm wondering if you can smooth out the legs on the girl in front. is it just me or does she look like she's got a serious case of cellulite? :P
i don't necessarily mind the squiggly thing but i'm not sure if it goes with the wall (maybe save that for a different wall). for the clouds i would get like 3-4 different cloud stock photos and blend them all together. then add a couple of birds. the birds' wing you reconstructed looks pretty good but is a little too blurred. try to make it a little more sharp.
overall your walls looks pretty nice. great job! :)
i don't necessarily mind the squiggly thing but i'm not sure if it goes with the wall (maybe save that for a different wall). for the clouds i would get like 3-4 different cloud stock photos and blend them all together. then add a couple of birds. the birds' wing you reconstructed looks pretty good but is a little too blurred. try to make it a little more sharp.
overall your walls looks pretty nice. great job! :)
Hey Hey!
So!Two new versions :
The first was rejected =(
Someone have advices ? Someone can help me ? ^^
So!Two new versions :
The first was rejected =(
Someone have advices ? Someone can help me ? ^^
3 years 1 month ago
First you should only post one wall per thread (I mean one attempt... Here at the end you have two and it's getting sometimes a bit hard to comment on both size...)
First wall :
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Okay I can tell easily why it has been rejected (or I think... :D)
1) The background is not original at all... Stars and space look is way too much use... And your space stars are not really special... :-s Look around on AP you'll see all those great background with stars and stuff... You have to compete with them :-s.
2) The reflect you add on the floor isn't right... If you take a mirror and you put something on it... Look at the reflect and you'll see yours is not right... It should reflect the bottom of the shoes and stuff like that... I like the idea but the angle and the reflect are wrong.
3) The glowing outline is brighter on the middle character... It looks strange and looks like you had extractions problems and try to cover them with it... :-s We can see the right arm of the middle character is a bit jaggy when it goes over the body of the right character... Try to fix that...
But that's all I can say for this wall... I like the X2 in the background...
Second wall :
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The clouds are nice. The bottom character is a bit too erased... It looks a bit strange.
Some of the birds in the sky look blurry or I don't know... There is something wrong but I can't tell you what... Sorry.
Except those points the scan looks really nice and the wall is not too simple or too empty... It's a really nice job! ;)
Good luck :)
First wall :
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Okay I can tell easily why it has been rejected (or I think... :D)
1) The background is not original at all... Stars and space look is way too much use... And your space stars are not really special... :-s Look around on AP you'll see all those great background with stars and stuff... You have to compete with them :-s.
2) The reflect you add on the floor isn't right... If you take a mirror and you put something on it... Look at the reflect and you'll see yours is not right... It should reflect the bottom of the shoes and stuff like that... I like the idea but the angle and the reflect are wrong.
3) The glowing outline is brighter on the middle character... It looks strange and looks like you had extractions problems and try to cover them with it... :-s We can see the right arm of the middle character is a bit jaggy when it goes over the body of the right character... Try to fix that...
But that's all I can say for this wall... I like the X2 in the background...
Second wall :
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The clouds are nice. The bottom character is a bit too erased... It looks a bit strange.
Some of the birds in the sky look blurry or I don't know... There is something wrong but I can't tell you what... Sorry.
Except those points the scan looks really nice and the wall is not too simple or too empty... It's a really nice job! ;)
Good luck :)
I come here in peace...
Or not...
:D
Hey !
ok, thank's for your advices Zazou8888, I will use them when I work again on this version ^^ Because I made a new version ( YES!ONE MORE TIME!Lol ) :
with 
So, advices are always welcomed ^^
ok, thank's for your advices Zazou8888, I will use them when I work again on this version ^^ Because I made a new version ( YES!ONE MORE TIME!Lol ) :
with 
So, advices are always welcomed ^^
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