Ok this is my new wallpaper..
the title could be .. Beautiful Girl

ok... so overall.. i think yur wall is pretty good! however.. i would jz like to bring your attention to the colour.. i don't think yellow suits.. well not this shade.. try to opt for a lighter shade.. so that the red will stand out and so that she doesnt look so... sick like she has been struck by yellow fever... try going for beige or light yellow.. or light pink... not blue or green...

other than that.. i think is ok!

I agree, the most bothersome at first site is the fact that the overall tone is all yellow. Maybe some should have been kept their original color... like white?
otherwise, your most immediate problem is that the wallpaper is over the size limit for it's size.. better try to fix this.

Hello there! :)

I am just a starter, anyway, I can write something. ;)
I liked the composition of the wallpaper very much! Detailed, pleasant. Good render.
I would suggest to change the overall coloring, despite - I think that greenish-yellow turns the image dull and depressing... We need shine, lively, fresh, soft colors here - in my opinion.

Good luck!

See you around!