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2 years 8 months ago
I thought it was good enough but it got rejected. I really thought that it was going to be rejected but I tried it anyways...
I would like some insight on what I should do to it. I put about 6 hours into this so far and I'll put 20 more if I have to! O.o;
Thanks in advance.
I would like some insight on what I should do to it. I put about 6 hours into this so far and I'll put 20 more if I have to! O.o;
Thanks in advance.
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Well its a bit... empty. there's like too many characters and nothing else. work on the BG, not on the toons. i'd say go for more colour, there's too much black.
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Hiya Vagetogt ^^
Sorry about the rejection, I'd love to help you with your wallpaper ^^ About your wallpaper now. I agree that the background is a little empty, there is alot of Black and not enough 'stuff' in the background. Maybe use some more brushes in the background?
Since your wallpaper isn't a scenery background, why not go for a really abstract background? Using some abstract brushes and placing them in the right area in the background will make the background look more full than it is now ^^
I like the white swirl going through the middle of the wallpaper though, thats really effective and looks cool ^O^ And heres a question for you XD Your sig at the left corner, is that pattern your sig?? I saw it the first time when you gave me a link but I never thought that that was your sig XD
Well hope that helped you ^^ If you need any other advice don't hesitate to ask ^^ Good luck with your wallpaper! Ganbatte!! ^O^
Sorry about the rejection, I'd love to help you with your wallpaper ^^ About your wallpaper now. I agree that the background is a little empty, there is alot of Black and not enough 'stuff' in the background. Maybe use some more brushes in the background?
Since your wallpaper isn't a scenery background, why not go for a really abstract background? Using some abstract brushes and placing them in the right area in the background will make the background look more full than it is now ^^
I like the white swirl going through the middle of the wallpaper though, thats really effective and looks cool ^O^ And heres a question for you XD Your sig at the left corner, is that pattern your sig?? I saw it the first time when you gave me a link but I never thought that that was your sig XD
Well hope that helped you ^^ If you need any other advice don't hesitate to ask ^^ Good luck with your wallpaper! Ganbatte!! ^O^
2 years 8 months ago
I'm going to work on those things and should have the updated version up by this weekend.
As for my signature it's the little {VG} in the bottom under Sora's right shoe (his right not yours).
As for my signature it's the little {VG} in the bottom under Sora's right shoe (his right not yours).
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Oh right!! I see now!! I can see your sig now XD LOL Thanks for pointing that out, so it's a {VG} I couldn't see the letters XD I'm so blind (no offence to blind people of course)
Well good luck with your wallpaper ^O^
Well good luck with your wallpaper ^O^
About your signature. I would say maybe make it more noticable. It won't really matter anyways, afterswards so making easy to find and read will give the wall a better chance of being accepted. Just a thought.
2 years 8 months ago
When it got denied the message said that it was too simple and empty. I sort of knew that but I didn't want to believe it... LOL!! I'm working on making it better... But it may take a bit.
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2 years 8 months ago
You're gonna need alot more stuff in your wallpaper to get it accepted, something inspiring that makes it jump out, I believe that having empty space in a wallie, for the most part, is a bad thing (unless it's intentional, and it simplisitic)
i suggest putting energy auras around the different soras, each with a different color.
that's my 2 cents..
i suggest putting energy auras around the different soras, each with a different color.
that's my 2 cents..
2 years 8 months ago
You're gonna need alot more stuff in your wallpaper to get it accepted, something inspiring that makes it jump out, I believe that having empty space in a wallie, for the most part, is a bad thing (unless it's intentional, and it simplisitic)
i suggest putting energy auras around the different soras, each with a different color.
I do like the idea however last night I came up with a great Idea!! I'm going to make it have a B/W brick wall and the pictures of Sora on the right are going to be on a poster and the one on the right is going to either be standing there with a shadow or I may try putting him close to the wall. That's my idea I'm not sure if I can pull it off..
I hope so cause it looked cool in my head!! ^-^
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2 years 8 months ago
Very good. have a picture in our head, and set upon making it hapen. although what you inteded to do might not be exactly your result, cause there will always bound to be a change, it will only be for the better not worse, so good luck. I like the idea you got though. :)
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2 years 7 months ago
Update:
I have done some stuff to see if it looks better. I tried to make it the way I saw it in my head but I couldn't get it right... So my sister had a great idea about making it look like he was on a save spot! ^-^ I like the way it turned out.
What do you think?
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2 years 7 months ago
Well if no one has anymore objections on it. Then I'm going to add something and sumbit it. ^-^
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Hey I really like the idea of having him standing on a save point! That's a really great idea ^O^ Thank your sis LOL ^____~
The wallpaper looks better than it was before, it doesn't look as busy no more. The only complaint I've got for you is that the shade of green you used XDDDDD Abit too dark isn't it XP I think you could make it lighter and the save point isn't all block green is it XD Try adding some effects to it that will make it look like an ACTUAL save point ^^ Using all sorts of light green shades and just make it seem like a save point on Kingdom Hearts ^^
Good luck~! And hope that helps you~!
The wallpaper looks better than it was before, it doesn't look as busy no more. The only complaint I've got for you is that the shade of green you used XDDDDD Abit too dark isn't it XP I think you could make it lighter and the save point isn't all block green is it XD Try adding some effects to it that will make it look like an ACTUAL save point ^^ Using all sorts of light green shades and just make it seem like a save point on Kingdom Hearts ^^
Good luck~! And hope that helps you~!
2 years 7 months ago
Thanks mblack! I'll consider it. I will post the finished (to me) product before I submit it. For final comments and then off the AP's submissions! ^-^
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Woah it looks totally awesum now!
the only issue i acn see is the frames around the little pics
they kinda screa
"hey hey look at me im over here!! are you looking yet?"
just an idea 2 thin them out a bit,
so they wont stick out so much XP
just my iopinion
love the save point it looks wicked as!
the only issue i acn see is the frames around the little pics
they kinda screa
"hey hey look at me im over here!! are you looking yet?"
just an idea 2 thin them out a bit,
so they wont stick out so much XP
just my iopinion
love the save point it looks wicked as!
Miroku: kagome is acting strangly what happened between you and kikiyo?
Inuyasha: Exactly the same thing that happens when your with a woman
Miroku. *GASP* ....... GHASTLY You did THAT right in frount of Kagome?!
Inuyasha: WHAT EXACTLY DO YOU DO WITH WOMEN?!
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