__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
Last Exile 1600 x 1200 wallpaper
Hello everybody,
Here's my latest wallpaper:
The characters are Tatiana & Alistia, the title is "Let the sky burn bright red as we fly faster than wind". There's some text I wrote that goes along with it, but I think I'll just save that for later.
I'd appreciate any opinions, feedback, or critiques you would offer so that I can make sure everything is as good as I can make it before I submit to the gallery.
Thanks very much for your help ^_^
~ August199
*Revision 1 - Text brightened by 10% (thanks to Yitian) and an couple of errors corrected (thanks to Fuujin)
*Revision 2 - All finished and going to gallery! Thanks everyone! see it here
Here's my latest wallpaper:
The characters are Tatiana & Alistia, the title is "Let the sky burn bright red as we fly faster than wind". There's some text I wrote that goes along with it, but I think I'll just save that for later.
I'd appreciate any opinions, feedback, or critiques you would offer so that I can make sure everything is as good as I can make it before I submit to the gallery.
Thanks very much for your help ^_^
~ August199
*Revision 1 - Text brightened by 10% (thanks to Yitian) and an couple of errors corrected (thanks to Fuujin)
*Revision 2 - All finished and going to gallery! Thanks everyone! see it here
I like what you wrote for the text, but it (the text) just doesn't really stand out. I had no ide hat there was actually and text on it before, so maybe you should work on that.
I think this is quite a solid piece of work. The quality and composition are both good. What I think might be a nice addition, though is a faint border over the middle part - since you're having it separate from the rest of the wall, might as well make that separation clear. There's also a faint white bit coming of the top-right corner in the middle section which you should fix.
You did a pretty good job on this piece! Keep it up.
You did a pretty good job on this piece! Keep it up.
Its a pretty good wallpaper! the colors are nice in the background,it goes with the scan. so youll be ok when you submit it to the gallery! you did a great job on this! ill remember to comment on it when you submit it,ok? keep the work up! ^.<
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3 years 9 months ago
I really like it actually even though I don't really know of the manga/anime, I love the background. I have to saythe scans? figures look at bit odd but overall I think it is very good btw thank for warning me bout this it is really worth it :)
It really looks good..nothing to correct...nice work!!...i like it!!...keep up the good work...i would like to see more wonderfulll wallpapers from you :)
Haha. I noticed the overlap of the clouds on the wall myself. You could always put the border underneath it! XD The text looks good with the higher opacity. ^^ Good job!
Hey, I like it... :D... i hope they approve it!!
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3 years 9 months ago
Hey august :)
looks pretty good to me. can't really think of anything you could do to change it. is that all the text you are going to have on it or will there be more? if this is it, that's fine. maybe try some other fonts, but overall it's a very pretty wp. i really like the pink clouds.
looks pretty good to me. can't really think of anything you could do to change it. is that all the text you are going to have on it or will there be more? if this is it, that's fine. maybe try some other fonts, but overall it's a very pretty wp. i really like the pink clouds.
Hey there, been quite busy lately and will answer most of what you wrote later on ^_^
On to the wall, this is lovely. I really like the feel and nice vectoring too. It looks really sharp and clear. But I have one comment about the wall though, that spaceship needs a bit of work maybe. Just around the edges, maybe some fading or something to make it blend in to the entire wall. It kinda looks like you just pasted it there. But I do think the effect of the red smoke or something hehe, looks cool! =)
I think overall, this is a very good wallpaper August! =)
On to the wall, this is lovely. I really like the feel and nice vectoring too. It looks really sharp and clear. But I have one comment about the wall though, that spaceship needs a bit of work maybe. Just around the edges, maybe some fading or something to make it blend in to the entire wall. It kinda looks like you just pasted it there. But I do think the effect of the red smoke or something hehe, looks cool! =)
I think overall, this is a very good wallpaper August! =)
Oh I'm hope I'm not too late! I really like the grey border going on there.The airplane does look a little funny,but thats just me,lol. Really great overall.
Fan-Fucking-Tastic!! O.o Great job!! No ubjections from me! ^-^
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Wall looks realy good but i would make some of the read smoke on the plane transpearnt that way you can see the plane alittle better
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3 years 9 months ago
It looks real nice. well done.
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Oohh very good, I like what you did there with the airplane and the clouds and the ship :D
The only things I see is the TEXT and the BORDER :D
Good luck, it will turn out grate :))!!
The only things I see is the TEXT and the BORDER :D
Good luck, it will turn out grate :))!!
