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Salvation
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Well, I think it has done but i feel strange with it... maybe the line or other thing. Some advice?
Thx :3
Its good
maybe you can already submit it..
good luck
maybe you can already submit it..
good luck
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Just two things:
- the ribbon and the collar is too black for the whole. maybe a little shading or gradient or something to make it look less captivating.
- for the line, i think just one question mark would be enough. other than that you might wanna change the font.
everything else is just fine. i think you should submit it soon.
S.
- the ribbon and the collar is too black for the whole. maybe a little shading or gradient or something to make it look less captivating.
- for the line, i think just one question mark would be enough. other than that you might wanna change the font.
everything else is just fine. i think you should submit it soon.
S.
That black thingy (ribbon?) stands out really much because it's more blocky than the rest of the char. As StarbuckJr said it is also too black or rather too monotonous, it has no details and why is that.
Also the bg looks nice but I get this feeling of texture and effect hammering when no real bg has been thought out.
Couldn't the bg be somehow linked to the salvation?
If you are going to stick with that bg style you should at least try to blend the edges of the bar a little bit or make the bar border really clear with contrast colored outlines.
Hope this helps and good luck.
Also the bg looks nice but I get this feeling of texture and effect hammering when no real bg has been thought out.
Couldn't the bg be somehow linked to the salvation?
If you are going to stick with that bg style you should at least try to blend the edges of the bar a little bit or make the bar border really clear with contrast colored outlines.
Hope this helps and good luck.
Hurrying into submission is not a very wise thing to do, imho. =/
i've never liked waist cut offs, especially when the character is in mid air in the wall. in most normal cases you never want to have a cut off so abrupt and visible. it just is a big mar in the entire thing. does the scan disappear after the waist? and why is there a bright blob at the end of one of her hair tresses? both of these facts reflect rather poorly on the usage of the scan and take away from the wall.
I also find that the middle portion of the wall rather irrelevant to the background (is that a blurry blown-up pic of dandelion-ish puffballs in the background o.o??) the middle part might look cool and all, but you must make sure every single part of the wall is there with a very good reason and interact well with the rest of the wall.
the small puffball in the bg is unnecessary. remove it.
and to stress on "salvation", make it a larger size, so that string of text looks more like a title-kinda-text in the wall.
and as to the sig, I only see "healing something"...unless you've explained it on your userpage/i can't read english, I think you need to add "garanbsp" in there somewhere.
anyway, sorry if i've sounded harsh anywhere throughout my critique and good luck on it! there are good things about this wall, but spending time outlining them won't help you improve your wall now will it? ;P
i've never liked waist cut offs, especially when the character is in mid air in the wall. in most normal cases you never want to have a cut off so abrupt and visible. it just is a big mar in the entire thing. does the scan disappear after the waist? and why is there a bright blob at the end of one of her hair tresses? both of these facts reflect rather poorly on the usage of the scan and take away from the wall.
I also find that the middle portion of the wall rather irrelevant to the background (is that a blurry blown-up pic of dandelion-ish puffballs in the background o.o??) the middle part might look cool and all, but you must make sure every single part of the wall is there with a very good reason and interact well with the rest of the wall.
the small puffball in the bg is unnecessary. remove it.
and to stress on "salvation", make it a larger size, so that string of text looks more like a title-kinda-text in the wall.
and as to the sig, I only see "healing something"...unless you've explained it on your userpage/i can't read english, I think you need to add "garanbsp" in there somewhere.
anyway, sorry if i've sounded harsh anywhere throughout my critique and good luck on it! there are good things about this wall, but spending time outlining them won't help you improve your wall now will it? ;P
Well thanks to all for the comments. I think I have to explain some things
Well, thats a long story, I usually sig. my signatures/wallpapers with Healing style and I take the costume here. Ill have to change my habits =P
haha don't worry. I put the wall here for improoving and advices and not for greasy comments xD
Thx again for comments ;p
"asa01"and as to the sig, I only see "healing something"...unless you've explained it on your userpage/i can't read english, I think you need to add "garanbsp" in there somewhere.
Well, thats a long story, I usually sig. my signatures/wallpapers with Healing style and I take the costume here. Ill have to change my habits =P
"asa01"anyway, sorry if i've sounded harsh anywhere throughout my critique and good luck on it! there are good things about this wall, but spending time outlining them won't help you improve your wall now will it? ;P
haha don't worry. I put the wall here for improoving and advices and not for greasy comments xD
Thx again for comments ;p
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