Hi every one. ^^ This wall from “Vampire knights” is my second try for making a wall for AP and I would appreciate it dearly if you give me your advice and critique. Please tell me what you like or don’t like in this wall, any suggestion, comment and idea is welcomed. Thanks so much for your time and attention in advance. *bows*

The wall paper

Quoting the FAQ (i won't use quote tags or the header wont appear =P)

Wallpaper Resolutions

We would love to be able to accept and provide wallpapers at all the weird, wacky and wonderful resolutions under the sun, but limitations of space, bandwidth and general usefulness prevent this from being practical. As such, wallpaper at AP can only be accepted in the following resolutions:

- 1024x768
- 1152x864
- 1280x960
- 1280x1024
- 1600x1200

Wide screen:

WXGA - 1440x900
WSXGA+ - 1680x1050
WUXGA - 1920x1200
WQXGA - 2560x1600

Any wallpaper resolutions outside the above list will be rejected from the approval queue or deleted if found/reported. Please take note that 1024x768 is the minimum wallpaper resolution at AP.

Upon successful submission the gallery script will generate smaller versions of the image in several resolutions so that members have a choice and can download the resolution suitable for their computer. As this is an automatic process all you need to do is upload one version.

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what i mean with this, is that the wall resolution is too small. minimum is 1024x768.
if you resized it to post here, then i'll comment the wallpaper.
well, this looks like more one scan to wall, so my suggestion is to give your personal touch to it. since those petal brushes is too simple for this to be accepted on AP

Agree with Danalm. Make a Larger Version.

They are right that it needs to be resized, but I can still see some other things to help you out with. I personally think the petals a re a nice touch, but to add depth to the wallpaper it might help if you add some petals into the foreground (either by extracting petals or painting them yourself). Sadly, I'm not familiar with the original scan so I don't know how much you did to it, so if you post a link to it I might be able to give you a more detailed critique. But I think it does a have a nice potential. Good luck with it!

Danalm, anii, thanks so much for pointing these details and flaws out and giving me your advices. ^__^ I am going to edit the wall and make it in with the right size this time. About adding my personal touch to it, you are absolutely right, I need to be more creative around the main idea of this wall and use more imagination so it can be accepted in AP.

~ArtificialRaindrop, I really appreciate your attention. Here is the link to the original scan, please tell me what do you think. I would like to know more about how this wall looks like in the eyes of others so I can work on the next sample of it with new approaches and idea's and make a better design of it.


The original scan

Wow very romantic! but i think you should make the background nicer...and maybe change the colors!! overall, its nice!