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Pirogoeth Wallpaper
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Hello everyone. This is my first wall and I was hoping to get some good feed back from you all. The program I use most is theGIMP since I can't use Adobe. So here is a link to what I have so far Pirogoeth Wallpaper
If it ask you for a password it is : develop
thanks ^_^
If it ask you for a password it is : develop
thanks ^_^
#315602 Quote Report Edited by ~animefreak10132 2 years 6 months ago
2 years 6 months ago
Good start but what resolution is that? doesn't look normal. min res is 1024x768.
i like the wings, those look neat. her face seems abit odd though. the space scene isnt' so bad, but i would lightly erase the stars closest to the ground. they should fade down, there are never that many stars that close to the horizon. also, it's making the wall look flat.
only other thing i can think of is that the grass needs some work. i suggest you look up tutorials on making grass, it will help out tons.
good luck! :)
i like the wings, those look neat. her face seems abit odd though. the space scene isnt' so bad, but i would lightly erase the stars closest to the ground. they should fade down, there are never that many stars that close to the horizon. also, it's making the wall look flat.
only other thing i can think of is that the grass needs some work. i suggest you look up tutorials on making grass, it will help out tons.
good luck! :)
Thanks for the input. ^_^
the res i have it at is 1280x1024. the site i used to have the image uploaded decreased its size. Im working on getting it moved to somewhere that won't make it smaller.
*edit*
try this http://members.cox.net/ktruchti/piro_1280_x_1024(w-kata).jpg
the res i have it at is 1280x1024. the site i used to have the image uploaded decreased its size. Im working on getting it moved to somewhere that won't make it smaller.
*edit*
try this http://members.cox.net/ktruchti/piro_1280_x_1024(w-kata).jpg
#315620 Quote Report Edited by ~animefreak10132 2 years 6 months ago
2 years 6 months ago
Good stuff ;) so ya, just work on the stuff that i mentioned earlier. also, i'm not so sure about the text. i'm thinking it might need some effects on it to make it more interesting. it's all very flat and "in your face" right now. i think it's cuz the wall is so dark and then you have this bright white text there.
Text was the hardest thing for me to decide on. So it's still being worked on the most. I just can't figure out what to do with it. Cause without it, I felt that it was too open and empty.
2 years 6 months ago
Just work on the bg right now and worry about the text afterwards.
Ehh... still working on the grass. This is what i have right now. http://members.cox.net/ktruchti/piro_1280_x_1024(w-kata).jpg
the front part is a bit blurry which i am working on.
Overall did i make the grass a bit better or make it worse?
the front part is a bit blurry which i am working on.
Overall did i make the grass a bit better or make it worse?
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I thought I should let you know... there isn't a category for Megatokyo, and fanart is not accepted, so you will not be able to submit that wallpaper here.
Also, your kana is incorrect. It should be ピロゴエツ - ro, not ri.
Good luck!
Also, your kana is incorrect. It should be ピロゴエツ - ro, not ri.
Good luck!
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