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Fly... by °Phill  3 weeks 5 hours  ago

Fly... by °Phill 3 weeks 5 hours ago

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This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.

While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.

ShoutBox

~uufhd 10 minutes ago
*huggles* hiya kip-kun ^_^

~angelgirl 11 minutes ago
HELLO AP PPL:)

~uufhd 19 minutes ago
Hello rohan =)

~Masamune1 25 minutes ago
Hello

~uufhd 1 hour 14 minutes ago
Huh...oh, right...cool n_n ...where did yuu wander off too then? =o

$acidtreat101 1 hour 25 minutes ago
Uufhd the series I was talking about earlier is called "Wheel of Time"

~uufhd 1 hour 32 minutes ago
Uhh...yeh...

*Kensai-Kaze 1 hour 34 minutes ago
Facepalm.jpg ...beind "urban" there.

~uufhd 1 hour 36 minutes ago
You mean scared?

*Kensai-Kaze 1 hour 43 minutes ago
Oooh, soo scured LOL!

Erm a rejected wallpaper

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~Geezote
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2 years 6 months ago
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/9729/chobitswallpaper020kw.jpg

I thought it was good D: What needs to be changed and what did I do wrong

Here's the original pic where I got it from:

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/3950/4655ka.jpg

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~Yulaw
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2 years 6 months ago
Normally when they send back a paper they also send the reason why, if you put em up, it will be alot easyer for us to tell you. My main gues for now is the background, why dont keep the same background / theme as the screenshot?

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~animepixel
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2 years 6 months ago
It might be the backround , what did you use to make the backround .

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$SFreedom
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...look closer
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2 years 6 months ago
Huh, the wall is pretty good :S
maybe the stars..? or doing best the vector//?

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`Almighty-Baka
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Guybrush Threepwood
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2 years 6 months ago
It is pretty good, but it was probably rejected because the background incorporates, for the most part, only one element - stars. There is some brushing, but its hardly noticeable. I disagree with the rejection, but it was probably because of the overuse of stars and not much else.

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$Kameo
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Vyzard
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2 years 6 months ago
Mmmmmmm i like that paper, its nice and its confortable to the eyes but maybe all those stars made it plain and ruined the whole thing......you got something good there, relax, reflex, and think about some ideas to make it better.....

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`puppychow16
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Flaming Turkey Of Doom
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2 years 6 months ago
The little dots.. There's just too many of them. Keep this vector wall as simple as possible..

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~Geezote
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2 years 6 months ago
Alright thanks for the advice, I'll remove some of the stars :O

And Yulaw all they left was "Wallpaper does not meet the standards"

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~Geezote
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2 years 6 months ago
Okay took out some stars and made the vector outline darker. How is this:

http://img400.imageshack.us/img400/4665/chobitswallpaper025yb.jpg

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`Shadow_Dude
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The Realistic
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2 years 6 months ago
Yeah it must be the background.
Maybe its just too simple or plain.
Maybe add something to it?

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~AriaSilverfyre
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Guardian of Time
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2 years 6 months ago
The second vector looks a lot better with the darker outline. The fewer stars also looks better. Maybe try changing the styles of the stars by using a few different star brushes and change up the intensities of the yellow. Make some brighter, others darker, etc. Other than that, I think it's a great concept you have going.

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~Yulaw
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2 years 6 months ago
Yup, the last version looks better, I think its overall good, goodluck on completing your wall!

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~ryokousei
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PISTOL KISS : no fear.
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2 years 6 months ago
Ack, that wallpaper was good. I have no idea why they rejected it. yes, someone from the staff does send you a private message saying why it got rejected. But truthfully, I think it shoul've been accepted [:

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~Geezote
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2 years 6 months ago
Oh well thanks for the advice and stuff I'll try uploading this version:

http://img400.imageshack.us/img400/4665/chobitswallpaper025yb.jpg

If it gets rejected again then I give up on it D: