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DN Angel wall...
Hi!!
Well, this is the second wall I make, it's too simple? all coments will be apreciated ^^
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/3488/angelrojo4psd1rm.jpg
Well, this is the second wall I make, it's too simple? all coments will be apreciated ^^
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/3488/angelrojo4psd1rm.jpg
I think it looks nice , althought the character looks a little grainy , also you signature is wrong it says animewallpapers .
I really like this wall, its simple and clean and thats the way I like it :P There are a vew things that needs attention though, and that is that the scan is quite low in quality, if you'd vectorize this image it would look alot better then it is now and change your signature because it aint really correct lol.
I have notice the wrong signature just after posting it here :P I think that in the red cloak is where it looks grainy (in the hair also a bit), I'll try fixing it, then if I haven't good results I will try vectorizing.
Thanks! ^^
Thanks! ^^
Hey I remember you, what happened to your other DN wall - did you end up finishing it?? :)
I think this wall looks really really good already, can't comment much other than to clean up the scan, iron out the grains and esp the 2 yellow dots on his clothes.
Good luck! ^^
EDIT:
there's also a gray line on top which might look like unclean cropping. I don't know if it's gonna make it too blindingly bright, but you could try making the wings whiter so the edges become fade-to-white kinda thing. Ditch the idea if it gets too bright :)
I think this wall looks really really good already, can't comment much other than to clean up the scan, iron out the grains and esp the 2 yellow dots on his clothes.
Good luck! ^^
EDIT:
there's also a gray line on top which might look like unclean cropping. I don't know if it's gonna make it too blindingly bright, but you could try making the wings whiter so the edges become fade-to-white kinda thing. Ditch the idea if it gets too bright :)
#212404 Quote Report Edited by `supermonchi 2 years 10 months ago
Hi Supermonchi! Yes, I posted a xxholic red wall a week ago here in zero paper. You give me the idea of placing the image like a card, so I scanned my sakura cards lol, but they need to be well cleaned (the ink points are very noticed)
A grey line on top? I will seach for it!! >_<
I have made the left wing with the same piece of feathers, changing the size and opacity, like a degradate, but i will try doing it brighter, maybe is too much...i will try tomorrow, i'm getting asleep on the keyboard...
bye!
A grey line on top? I will seach for it!! >_<
I have made the left wing with the same piece of feathers, changing the size and opacity, like a degradate, but i will try doing it brighter, maybe is too much...i will try tomorrow, i'm getting asleep on the keyboard...
bye!
Yep, the scan really needs to be cleaned up some more. Besides that, I'm not too keen about the swirly brush effects in the background - they are a bit too transparent, and the darker color where they overlap throws me off - i think it would be nicer if they were all the same color, so that it all looks like one swirl. Their edges look jagged and blurred to me, were they scaled up from a smaller dimension?
Besides that, it's excellent - nice layout and composition, a clean, simple wall. Keep up the good work!
Besides that, it's excellent - nice layout and composition, a clean, simple wall. Keep up the good work!
I agree with the vectorizing comments
hmmm its a nice wall, the bg is great but could be better
kinda seems empty to me but its all good
hmmm its a nice wall, the bg is great but could be better
kinda seems empty to me but its all good
It is nice
Hmm, yes a bit of improvement on the image. also i suggest adding a bit of contrast so that the wings would look clearer and more emphasized.
Hi again! Thanks to all your coments, with them in mind i have tried fixing the wall.
Well...i have tried fixing the character's colors, i think that now doesn't look grainy
fixed the signature
the wings: in some parts more contrast, others brighter
fixed a bit the swirls
http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/7006/angelrojo63su.jpg
More coments, things to add?
Thanks! ^^
Well...i have tried fixing the character's colors, i think that now doesn't look grainy
fixed the signature
the wings: in some parts more contrast, others brighter
fixed a bit the swirls
http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/7006/angelrojo63su.jpg
More coments, things to add?
Thanks! ^^
The wall seems low quality because the scan needs cleaning. See how the shadowing in his sleeves are? That's not good/clean. Your attempt to extend his wings by creating repetetive "ghost" images is kinda bland and not helping the fact that the positioning of the scan is all the way to the right, and not helping fill up the wall at all. It's kinda obvious youre trying to fill it with the wings. Also your brush work is so blurry that it's a bother. Perhaps it's because these brushes were not meant to be so big and enlarging it caused pixelation? You should rethink the composition to this wall.
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
The scan is cleaner than before, but you still need to work on some parts like the face, the neck, and the ends of the long hair - behind the wing at the right side of the wall, and the bits near the swirls. Clean the whole scan, not just the large obvious areas.
Also want to point out that some of the eyebrow/eyelash outlines in the hair got blurred over or removed entirely in your cleaning. Try to fix it back.
The contrast works well in some places, but near where his hand is gripping the shoulder, some of the outlines have become a little gritty.
There were a few loose feathers just to his left before, I thought they were pretty nice, you should put them back.
You missed it or forgot to look for it. It's along the top edge, from around the center to just above his head.
Yup, I hate to say it the swirls don't look much different from before at all. I'm thinking phoenix may be right about this - you might have to find better brushes or just vector the swirls yourself.
Keep up the good work!
Also want to point out that some of the eyebrow/eyelash outlines in the hair got blurred over or removed entirely in your cleaning. Try to fix it back.
The contrast works well in some places, but near where his hand is gripping the shoulder, some of the outlines have become a little gritty.
There were a few loose feathers just to his left before, I thought they were pretty nice, you should put them back.
edetxuA grey line on top? I will seach for it!! >_<
You missed it or forgot to look for it. It's along the top edge, from around the center to just above his head.
puppychow16Perhaps it's because these brushes were not meant to be so big and enlarging it caused pixelation?
Yup, I hate to say it the swirls don't look much different from before at all. I'm thinking phoenix may be right about this - you might have to find better brushes or just vector the swirls yourself.
Keep up the good work!
2 years 10 months ago
Same as what everyone said before, at the bottom your signature... might wanna change that ^_^
I think it looks good. I do think you should outline more of the wings.
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It is look cool...but you must clean it cause it is grainy.....and the sign. must say animepaper.net