Thanks for the replies , i dont mind if you drew on the wallpaper . It actually helps alot . Well i made some changes. Firat off i added a shadow . I think its in the right place , second i tried the blur with an overlay , but it didnt look really good but thanks for the suggestion . Well what do you think ?

Looking nice than any other version posted before.Good concept and compact frame ,I like it.
Maybe it can be saved as a higher quality wallpaper?I think that will be better.

You kno what? i know a wall that'll maybe open your eyes a little, and help, perhaps. :D

your wall... has a good concept, but when I look at it, it seems pretty...average, and doesn't really catch the eye as it potentially could.

I see in one of your versions you tried to add some splashes to make it abit more interesting, however adding interesting objects does not mean random color, shape, placement, or poor quality.

I like the idea of the waves, but it's almost too generic plain and organized. I say that, but you also don't want it messy.

The shadow isn't THAT necessary imo. especially since the shadow you added seems to be blurry. never mix blurry things with your sharp vector.

http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/blu3angl/item20977/ ah there's the wall I was talking about.
you see.. how... the waves are different shaped, yet they layer, and create depth.

In an abstract wall like yours, you don't want the shadows to be...transparent like that, because it kinda messes up the solid style you have going there.

try waves like that, Don't have the same sunrays background, because there's something else that would fit yoru wall better in terms of background.
A sky theme in the back there is a good idea for this wall. just think about how to make it flow and present the character. Make sure you know how your wall should FEEL like.

that's all! :D good job on it, and good luck too!

It looks really good now, but the edges of Renton seem really messy... or that could just be my imagination. *shrugs* Good job! :D

I think it looks brilliant right now.
it's clean and sharp..
I think it looks fabulous.. but then again.. I'm not very experienced myself.

prettypeoplelie

It looks really good now, but the edges of Renton seem really messy... or that could just be my imagination. *shrugs* Good job! :D

Thankd for the comments . Well the image looks jagged because image shack scales the image , so you need to click on it.

EDIT: Well i added some sort of star things at the top . Does it look better ? Also decided to change the text on the suggestion http://trismugistus.animepaper.net/ . Look better , should i got back to the tittle?

I think you can afford to be more detailed and extravagant with the stars by really making them look neat. currently, they look very basic. and maybe you can even add some of the white misty stuff you have near the bottom.

anyway, try to be more careful with the text warp and adjust it better. currently, the curvature of the text does not match the curvature of the wave.

as well, renton seems to have too much green in him now. i mean, the shadows of his red shirt are greenish and that's kind of weird. (pardon my bad memory, but after watching a bit of eureka seven some time ago, i don't remember renton as having green pants?) keep on working! it's coming along.

Asa, I don't think those are his pants... I think it's that little case he carries on his side all the time. It holds... something. I don't know what yet. :p

Oh, I see where I went wrong now, animepixel. I wasn't viweing at full-size. Sorry. >.<

But I agree with asa, the stars on top look really basic and boring. Like spots. Maybe if you added outer glow, or made it look like the stars on bottom...?