Need help with this wallpaper!
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It was rejected, and I don't know why...
Maybe I'm decreasing my quality. But if I do, I'll just have to increase it again!
Well, when you see anything wrong with the wall, just tell me and I'll fix it!
here!
Maybe I'm decreasing my quality. But if I do, I'll just have to increase it again!
Well, when you see anything wrong with the wall, just tell me and I'll fix it!
here!
This post has been filtered for improved legibility #561213 Quote Report Edited by ~Tsunuki-chan 1 year 6 months ago
1 year 6 months ago
Well, a couple of comments here. First of all, the wallpaper looks stunning and beautiful at first sight. That's the problem though, it only looks good at first sight. As you study the wallpaper, you can see a few technical errors on it.
1. The wings. They are supposed to be extended from the back to the front, but the extension looks awkward, and doesn't use the same texture as the wings portrayed in the scan.
2. Sumomo and Chii's face have been whitened too much. It's kind of a distraction, and does not allow us to appreciate the scan much, due to lack of color.
3. I don't know if it's me, or the wallpaper, but it appears to me that the Chii, artificial angel text is not centered. Could be the height of Chii, or the color gradient, but it doesn't seem to be positioned in the center for me.
Overall, though, it's a good wallpaper. But, excuse my forwardness, I believe that your past work is better compared to this one. Keep it up though, we can expect great things from you.
1. The wings. They are supposed to be extended from the back to the front, but the extension looks awkward, and doesn't use the same texture as the wings portrayed in the scan.
2. Sumomo and Chii's face have been whitened too much. It's kind of a distraction, and does not allow us to appreciate the scan much, due to lack of color.
3. I don't know if it's me, or the wallpaper, but it appears to me that the Chii, artificial angel text is not centered. Could be the height of Chii, or the color gradient, but it doesn't seem to be positioned in the center for me.
Overall, though, it's a good wallpaper. But, excuse my forwardness, I believe that your past work is better compared to this one. Keep it up though, we can expect great things from you.
Well, first of all, thank you very much for spending your time in criticizing my wall.
I didn't know that the wings looked like they were connected to that white thingy in the bottom right....but yes, it looks like it. But it's not a bad idea to delete those purplish wings and make new white wings and connect them to the white thingy in the bottom right...
Thanks for giving me the idea! :3
I didn't know that the wings looked like they were connected to that white thingy in the bottom right....but yes, it looks like it. But it's not a bad idea to delete those purplish wings and make new white wings and connect them to the white thingy in the bottom right...
Thanks for giving me the idea! :3
1 year 6 months ago
I think you must extend the wings of chy..and her face must not be blurry..
Ok guys thanks for the critiques! I may start to fix it on friday, today and tomorrow I'll be pretty busy....
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