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Fly... by °Phill  2 months 2 weeks  ago

Fly... by °Phill 2 months 2 weeks ago

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This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.

While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.

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±angel-voice 28 minutes ago
Upps, I'm glad that my boss doesn't have a PC

°akiranyo 30 minutes ago
Hehe. Too bad for us, cause I also work to 17.30 today. Btw gtg now. Boss can come in any second and I'm on his PC.lol

~lildevil8200 30 minutes ago
Wow that sucks angel ...so when do you go home aki?

±angel-voice 32 minutes ago
Haha, me too but I started work. So I need to wait till 5pm before I can go home. So nearly 7 hours to go :(

°akiranyo 34 minutes ago
Feeling tired today. I wanna go home already ;3

±angel-voice 37 minutes ago
Chocolate cake is always good for the mood. How are you aki-chan?

°akiranyo 40 minutes ago
Gald that you liked it, Voicy-sama ;3 *facepalm*

~lildevil8200 40 minutes ago
Ohhhh...well how are you guys?

~thebigfatwhale 41 minutes ago
Bai! *gawn*

±angel-voice 41 minutes ago
Oh, chocolate cake *hugs aki-chan*

Need help with this wallpaper!

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~Tsunuki-chan
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1 year 6 months ago
It was rejected, and I don't know why...
Maybe I'm decreasing my quality. But if I do, I'll just have to increase it again!
Well, when you see anything wrong with the wall, just tell me and I'll fix it!
here!

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$DZeroX
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1 year 6 months ago
Well, a couple of comments here. First of all, the wallpaper looks stunning and beautiful at first sight. That's the problem though, it only looks good at first sight. As you study the wallpaper, you can see a few technical errors on it.

1. The wings. They are supposed to be extended from the back to the front, but the extension looks awkward, and doesn't use the same texture as the wings portrayed in the scan.

2. Sumomo and Chii's face have been whitened too much. It's kind of a distraction, and does not allow us to appreciate the scan much, due to lack of color.

3. I don't know if it's me, or the wallpaper, but it appears to me that the Chii, artificial angel text is not centered. Could be the height of Chii, or the color gradient, but it doesn't seem to be positioned in the center for me.

Overall, though, it's a good wallpaper. But, excuse my forwardness, I believe that your past work is better compared to this one. Keep it up though, we can expect great things from you.

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~Tsunuki-chan
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1 year 6 months ago
Well, first of all, thank you very much for spending your time in criticizing my wall.
I didn't know that the wings looked like they were connected to that white thingy in the bottom right....but yes, it looks like it. But it's not a bad idea to delete those purplish wings and make new white wings and connect them to the white thingy in the bottom right...
Thanks for giving me the idea! :3

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~asian-winter08
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1 year 6 months ago
I think you must extend the wings of chy..and her face must not be blurry..

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~Tsunuki-chan
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1 year 6 months ago
Ok guys thanks for the critiques! I may start to fix it on friday, today and tomorrow I'll be pretty busy....

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