Well, well, this is the first wallpaper I want to post here, any comments will be appreciated, but unfortunately if you want major changes I will have to work on that next week.


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Don't really understand the flying glass...or the really bright part above the gun. I would've guessed that was part of the broken glass, but nothing else matches it...The background is also sorta simple and repetitive...should probably find someway to spice it up a bit with some variety. Vector looks good, the grunge on the blood is really wierd. Don't really understand where the blood's coming from either...XD haha eh

That bright spot above the gun with that gray line hovering next to it...i stared at it for like how long? i looked at it, looked at it...and looked at it some more. then i was like "oh, it's GLASS!" lol XD yeah...it's a bit awkward as glass. dunno how to fix that though. i haven't yet seen one wall with broken glass that looks satisfyingly like broken glass.

it's the first time i've seen LIGHT grunge + buildings..and it seems a bit weird. as well, you grunge...somehow seems repetitive o.o? i'm confused but that's what comes to mind. have more variation and give it some attitude. >=] (i think most likely because the spread of the detail is much too even.) the buildings also needs some toning because they look clean and look as if they belong in a vector-pop wall, not a grunge one. (it's bright for a grunge ^^; and my mind keeps on repeating that) and the red stuff in the corner looks bad, even if you are trying to go for blood. well, if you are good at walling and have a fine sense of artistic abilities, then you can try to draw flying blood splatters. otherwise, get rid of the patchy blood. =/

the vector, pretty good. so yeah. that's that. ^^ good luck fixing up stuff.
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edit: okay, so i had to mention this. i find your choice of outlining in comparison to the border between light areas and dark areas rather weird, because your outline doesn't follow that border and so sometimes there are bright stuff in where there should be dark stuff.

I am digging the Gungrave! Boo-yah! Okay, incomprehensible babbling aside, the figure has a very sketchy and unfinished feeling to it. This could be a stylistic choice and there's nothing wrong with it, but the eyes and the left ear need additional attention. ^_^; Ah! If you want to give some sort of context as to where the blood is coming from, you could place a faint reflection of whoever is being shot in the pieces of broken glass. It looks like broken glass to me but a reflection of some sort may help it look more believable.

The composition is pretty cool, but I would skip the glass since it has logical meaning. I get that the red area is blood but the glass makes it like the shot person was dressed in glass or something =/. His eyes are little bit weird, especially his left eye I think is too dark and shadowed. Overall it needs more work, good luck :D!

This wallpaper made me laugh for a second. Harry's pose and look are really funny in this wall. But I think it's a very unique and creative piece of work. Might want to follow on others' opinions given here since they are all valid.

Thanks for your replies, I agree about the "bloody" part, but I didn't understand that last reply...

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Might want to follow on others' opinions given here since they are all valid.