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What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty  3 weeks 2 days  ago

What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty 3 weeks 2 days ago

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Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!

ShoutBox

~AnimeKid202 9 seconds ago
No the fuck am not am 16 what the fuck asshole

~Shinyjam 1 minute ago
He 15.

~thebigfatwhale 1 minute ago
Excuse me?

^hatesyou 1 minute ago
Anything else to add kid?

~AnimeKid202 1 minute ago
Check my myspace www.myspace.com/dr_joey15 you did not add mii as a friend because you cant say stupid jokes about mii

~thebigfatwhale 3 minutes ago
Calm down.

~AnimeKid202 4 minutes ago
Am

~Shinyjam 4 minutes ago
I am leaving this =.=

~tyson120 4 minutes ago
-facepalm-

~thebigfatwhale 5 minutes ago
Language.

GOOD? GREAT? AWESOMEEEE?

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~muffinator
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2 years 2 months ago
Haha, just kidding, it's horrible
I'm working on this wallpaper.. And I'm not quite sure what else to do... Suggestions please?

WALLPAPER!
Oh, and how is it? What do you think of it so far?

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$Arei
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2 years 2 months ago
This is a very beautiful wallpaper :) The top of the head doesnt seem to be as smoothly extracted as the rest of it... just a little bit though, it needs a little cleaning. Dont forget to add your sig, otherwise it looks fine :)

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~muffinator
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2 years 2 months ago
Oh.. So you think that the wallpaper is fine without anything else added, 'cept for my sig, some minor changes and some text, of course :)
Thanks!
:D

I might want to add a few things, but thanks for the advice :)

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~baka-neko64
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2 years 2 months ago
It's a very pretty wallpaper indeed! ^_^

But a few things could be fixed on it...first of all...I would make at least the right hand side of your wall brighter...it's very difficult to see (at first...it looked like it was just black on the right side...but when I looked closer...I noticed that you had a very nice bg there! Don't hide it! ^_^)

But in addition to making your bg brighter...I would say to make the girl darker as well...You don't really need to make her darker (by like changing the Brightness/Contrast) but by adding darker shadows and stuff to her...right now...she stands out a lot and looks like she doesn't really fit with the rest of the wall...So REALLY try to look as if the flower is giving off a birght light instead of having her look like as if she was in a bright room or something ^_^ I hope I wasn't too confusing on that...If you don't understand...just ask me to clarify more...I'll be more than happy to try and help again...

And don't forget your sig! And if you want to (but it isn't necessary) you could also add some text...but if you don't like text...then it's fine ^_^

But it's looking really great!

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~muffinator
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2 years 1 month ago
^^ Thank you for the advice, I'll darken her up abit and try to brighten my background, which is on the left, I think.. Not the right :D

I'll update when I can. =)

Anyone else? :D
A little comment would be nice too.. I like them <3 emoticon

---Edit

I need some ad-vice =)

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`slaka16789
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2 years 1 month ago
Yeaah!! i love it, I really like goregous, dark wallpapers :) I absolutely adore it :)!

Little things I see wrong, the feather/petal on the far right looks to fake and has a ALOT of noise on it. the whole figure looks like you pulled up the contrast a bit, which I like to do but the result is the small highly contrasted pixels of red, green and blue etc. You can see them in the shoulder, her elbowpit, and pretty much all around the line of her body. Its little things like this that AP has to Discard the picture for. Also I dont get the black lines on the character? are thos intentional if so what are they? One thing I thought would look neat if you could pull it off is adding the shadow of bars from the greenhouse window on the character :) I think it would look neat. and instead of brigtening teh whole backround I think you should eitehr leave it there, or only brighten up the wall on the right side. and leave the silouhetts of the trees black. I love that part :) Otherwise its great! I think that if you wanted to add text the left side is a perfect place for it, because of the size of the pic. (its wide) and have it be the color of the flower with the same effect comming off of it, but makes ure the flower is still dominant. You could probly say something mysterious too. Also add a pink glow on her Face a bit, and ecpecially her eyes ;) okay GL!!! I really love it! Great work!

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2 years 1 month ago
Nice wall, but there are a few bits that need cleaning on the girl. I don't think you need to add shadows as there isn't much light coming through the windows; however, the both feathers should be glowing and her arm needs adjustment to accord with the light emanating from the flowers and feathers, as it appears to be in the wall. Paint in some more highlight on her arm and face to perfect the consistency... Not sure what else you could do. Try upping the brightness slightly around the edges of the windowpanes to help highlight the foliage silhouettes... maybe try adding a moon into the night sky outside as a secondary focal point if you like. Text would be best placed in line with one of the bars between the window panes, horizontally or vertically would be fine but level with or below her shoulder/armpit.

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~muffinator
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2 years 1 month ago
Wow really great advice from the two of you!Thanks very much, I'll keep all of it in mind when I get to finishing it ^__^
Thanks thanks thanks you two!

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~aznxenocide
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2 years 1 month ago

muffinator
Haha, just kidding, it's horrible
I'm working on this wallpaper..


haha with that strikeout, it reads "I'm on this wallpaper." Which doesn't make much sense. XXDDDD

Her hair looks wierd cut out like that...how it's all smooth and everything...while the rest of her is totally grunged up and whatnot. It'd be nice if the tree silouhette wasn't completely black too, so you could give it a bit of texture. It's a nice concept though. I think a litle bit of text would be good...something serif-y or slight script..Nice job!