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What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty  3 weeks 2 days  ago

What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty 3 weeks 2 days ago

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Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!

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~thebigfatwhale 1 minute ago
Calm down.

~AnimeKid202 1 minute ago
Am

~Shinyjam 1 minute ago
I am leaving this =.=

~tyson120 2 minutes ago
-facepalm-

~thebigfatwhale 2 minutes ago
Language.

~AnimeKid202 2 minutes ago
See like that you stupid fucker am not fucking playin bitch you is geting mii so fucking tight...

~Shinyjam 3 minutes ago
And I added you as friend so calm down

~thebigfatwhale 3 minutes ago
Agreed.

~Shinyjam 3 minutes ago
Although I really think he is under age now...

~thebigfatwhale 3 minutes ago
No I don't see.

a wallpaper

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~yunagamer
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Think of the voices we are not hearing today
Topics: 36
Posts: 75
2 years 1 month ago
Tell me what else i need i cant figure it out

User posted image

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~pandaintoxication
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maid of the ~
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2 years 1 month ago
Well, the overall the wall lacks body. I'm going to go out on a limb and assume you did not make the original image and just added a backround to it. The backround is not very exciting, and you'll need to do something to it to give it definition. I'd consider adding some sort of sparkles and effects to it, [go to devart for sparkle brushes]. I don't particularly like the backround you have now since it's pretty generic.

Also, make your signature in a different color, black rarely compliments a colorful wallpaper~

#432985 Quote Report Edited by ~pandaintoxication 2 years 1 month ago

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*zazou8888
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Eternal Beginner... Dreaming woman
Topics: 23
Posts: 1279
2 years 1 month ago
The extraction looks pretty nice so it's a good start... But the background definitely needs some work...

I understand the style you use but it's not really working for a wallpaper... You should try to add some text or an other character maybe.

This make me think of the "tea time" world.. The white part under the character looks like a mat for the tea table... If this was the way you wanted to have... Maybe try some tea disgn around the character.

Sorry if you don't get what I mean...

#432994 Quote Report Edited by *zazou8888 2 years 1 month ago

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°imPanda
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Posts: 506
2 years 1 month ago
Overall, the concept is ok.. It's just missing that extra thing to make it stand out among the rest. Maybe a texture over the pattern you have in the backround? Right now it's just a repetitive pattern.

You could always make things coming from the center, beacuse I'm asuming that is the main focus right? For some odd reason, my eyes are looking more at the green then the girl.

Good luck.

~imPanda

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~yunagamer
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Think of the voices we are not hearing today
Topics: 36
Posts: 75
2 years 1 month ago
Thats the link for devart

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*zazou8888
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Eternal Beginner... Dreaming woman
Topics: 23
Posts: 1279
2 years 1 month ago
What link? o_O

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~yunagamer
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Think of the voices we are not hearing today
Topics: 36
Posts: 75
2 years 1 month ago
From pandaintoxication

she said
[go to devart for sparkle brushes]

were is devart

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~aznxenocide
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Kung Fu Jesus
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Posts: 480
2 years 1 month ago
Deviantart.com

Is the concept her coming out of the mirror?? Maybe make the mirror bigger so it's clearer...and yeah, the bg looks really plain. You should try putting some more texture on it. Find some way to bring the focus to the girl more...maybe by adding lighting or something.

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~mellykill
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you're a little too modern for my tastes.
Topics: 29
Posts: 557
2 years 1 month ago
Yeah, as everyone else has said, textures on the bg, also, it looks like when you were cloning your scan onto your bg, you got a few artifacts in there, check on the left side of her hair, (top and bottom) there are just random black dots there that don't need to be there.
other than that, I really like the concept, very antique looking.

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°fayt19
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Count Phantomhive
Topics: 58
Posts: 524
2 years 1 month ago
I don't think it's quite antique already. If you want to create a REAL antique sensation,use sepia colors. And if i mention your sig,it's written there 'SummonerYuna' while your username is yunagamer. You have to use a sig that match your username. If you're rejected,that's must be because of this reason. Although i don't know what's on the mod's mind. The bg is the main problem that really bugs me somehow..i think it's not 'enough' yet..but i just can't tell it in words. But i like the scan. It's beautiful. ^^