Edward Elric
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Sorry, I don't understand you...but hopefully you understand me. What language is it? Whatever...there are definite cutting issues around Ed. You can see pixels of the original background, and even white spaces by his coat...that needs to be cleaned up. The main stock is also really grainy...The blurred out version of ed in the background is sorta wierd...the rest of the bg is all blue, and it's hard to tell where to focus your eyes on. Both the small, in focus Ed and the big, blurry ed vie for attention...and it's kinda wierd. The text is definitely wierd...Try to find something more tech-y or grunge-y. Background's alright...see if you can't incorporate Ed into the bg more.
Hhhmmm...the big scan on the back is quite blurry...I think you just need to change the blending of that into screen...I think it'll look nice...then...the text...it doesn;t look good to me..I mean..look..your text is ssooo..bloddy then your concept is out of bloody thing...well..I hope this one helps yah...good luck on that wall!
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