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Revised Hellish Beauty.
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What do you think?its red again, but with added autumn branches and pink outline.
--The pleasure of a dream is that it is a fantasy
if a dream becomes reality, it is never a dream--
Can you please post the last one you did..
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"Be silent, I'll do better."
... .. ...Still doing busy... . .. ...
what noW?
--The pleasure of a dream is that it is a fantasy
if a dream becomes reality, it is never a dream--
Your sig is really distracting...uh and the fall leaves look ALOT like you just found a picture and stuck it on. It doesn't match with the rest of the wall at all. The red stuff on her hair is also really blurry...should probably clean that up. How'd you do the lines around her?? Cuz I'd suggest just vectoring those lines so they're cleaner...
Did you seriously just copy/paste my post??
DHAHHAHAHaa THATS GREAT! (the copy cat)
I like the feel for the image actually with the autmun scene than the childish scene, you just need to vector a nice pattern for the red dress and background. Its WAT TOO PIXLEY beyond comprehension so discard it or vector it. Id say get rid of the trees or bring less focus on them. I LOVE the trees on her skin thoough!! GJ and GL
~slaka
I like the feel for the image actually with the autmun scene than the childish scene, you just need to vector a nice pattern for the red dress and background. Its WAT TOO PIXLEY beyond comprehension so discard it or vector it. Id say get rid of the trees or bring less focus on them. I LOVE the trees on her skin thoough!! GJ and GL
~slaka
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I need you to choose between these two:
--The pleasure of a dream is that it is a fantasy
if a dream becomes reality, it is never a dream--
If i had a choice, i'd choose the one with more black in it. to me, the other one is sooo red, it's making me see everything else as green ( ok i admit i have weak eyes! ) yup. since you submitted the colourful one & it's been accepted, are you still gonna continue with this version of the wall?
Yeah, of course, they're sill different right? so you chose the second one, you said "it's making me see everything else as green" are you color blind? just curious!
--The pleasure of a dream is that it is a fantasy
if a dream becomes reality, it is never a dream--
Hahah I dont see any green haha. I like this one better than colorful but I gotta break it to you that the image is way to pixelated. like everywhere, It absolutly will NOT Be accepted by Ap with even the slightest pixelation I say that a good vector would be the best for this.
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No lah! you know how the human eye works? well to put it simply, when you stare too long at a certain colour, the pigment in the eye that lets you see that colour gets depleted ( i think ) so yea that makes everything else the opposite appear of the colour for a while ( like green in this case ). sorry but im not very sure about this, just vaguely remember how it goes.
I'll try not get so "pixelated" on my wallpapers...next time =D
--The pleasure of a dream is that it is a fantasy
if a dream becomes reality, it is never a dream--
You’re using the same scan? Isn’t that a bit uncreative? =/
Well, that’s your problem not mine. My job is to critique and that’s what I’m going to do now ^^
Out of the latest two versions, I would choose the second one. This is mostly because the first one is way too saturated with red. I like the idea with the leaves but there are some problems with them. They have fuzzy edges, most likely from a poor extraction from where ever you got them from. Clean them up.
Next, are the patterns on her face meant to be shadows? o_O Well, if they are, I’d just like to say that they’re not even the same type of leaves. The pattern on her skin is more like flowers.
Lastly, even though I like the second version with less red, something needs to be done with the transition area between the two. There’s a really grainy/painty texture where the black and the red cross and that doesn’t look really good. Try to smooth it out a bit.
Well, that’s your problem not mine. My job is to critique and that’s what I’m going to do now ^^
Out of the latest two versions, I would choose the second one. This is mostly because the first one is way too saturated with red. I like the idea with the leaves but there are some problems with them. They have fuzzy edges, most likely from a poor extraction from where ever you got them from. Clean them up.
Next, are the patterns on her face meant to be shadows? o_O Well, if they are, I’d just like to say that they’re not even the same type of leaves. The pattern on her skin is more like flowers.
Lastly, even though I like the second version with less red, something needs to be done with the transition area between the two. There’s a really grainy/painty texture where the black and the red cross and that doesn’t look really good. Try to smooth it out a bit.
I was wondering, if a wallpaper has a blur effect, will it be accepted by AP??
like this one, I just experimented a little bit, I added an gaussian blur effect
like this one, I just experimented a little bit, I added an gaussian blur effect
--The pleasure of a dream is that it is a fantasy
if a dream becomes reality, it is never a dream--
I dont see the major diffrence.
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