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A wall from DNangel
pls..leave a comment or anything you can say to this...
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8466/lighttw6.jpg
pls..leave a comment or anything you can say to this...
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8466/lighttw6.jpg
I think it's quite nice, but in my opinion, there isn't really a focal point. The two pictures kind of battles with your eyes to let you figure out just exactly what you should be seeing. The back image suits the background fairly nicely because it's got an angelic feel to it and that blends well with the sparkly clouds at the back.
The only thing I would change is set a different location of the front render to elsewhere on the wallpaper or take him off altogether, it just doesn't seem right.
The texts on the bottom left is a little choppy (the word "Light").
Overall, some more effects could be applied as it looks semi-empty as well, like some brushing, more combinations of filters and more colour correction perhaps, but keep in mind that wallpaper if a lot better than a lot I've seen =)
*ganbate!~*
The only thing I would change is set a different location of the front render to elsewhere on the wallpaper or take him off altogether, it just doesn't seem right.
The texts on the bottom left is a little choppy (the word "Light").
Overall, some more effects could be applied as it looks semi-empty as well, like some brushing, more combinations of filters and more colour correction perhaps, but keep in mind that wallpaper if a lot better than a lot I've seen =)
*ganbate!~*
Hmm i think this wallies is nice >.< the effect is nice and the scan is clean , but why the trousers have an galaxy effect -_- . i think it is strange to put that effect there >.<
The walls nice but you dont have a focus point when seeing it I dont know who im supposed to be lookking at the blond kid or the guy with blue hair, and like sunchip said the text needs to be better ive noticed after seeing some walls by you, text is something you struggle with maybe look for tutorials on messing with text
Im not sure if the white light strings are good to have there or not. you could make better. and the yellow hair in bottom left seems too light. overall its a nice wall. : )
usoophmm i think this wallies is nice >.< the effect is nice and the scan is clean , but why the trousers have an galaxy effect -_- . i think it is strange to put that effect there >.<
lol there are not in galaxy but they are in heaven..well.you can understand it when you watched that anime..but thanks for the comment anyway..
Lol no, nud's isn't talking about the background, he's talking about the stars on the pants...XD hahaa funny phrase. erm yeah. I think it's becuase you tried to not make a block of black? you could accomplish the same thing with just some cloudy fog like textures, withought having to do the stars...The text could be placed better, and in a better font. Also, the guy with the blue hair is sorta just there...he's not really integrated into the wall as the yellow-haired guy. Try some textures on top of the characters.
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