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What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty  1 week 3 days  ago

What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty 1 week 3 days ago

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Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!

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~XXAnime-AngelXX 17 minutes ago
(x_x) emoticon

~Blizzardsunshine 22 minutes ago
H2O - Footprints in the Sand

~XXAnime-AngelXX 36 minutes ago
Hi

~JH3M 1 hour 18 minutes ago
Hi

`Bernouli 1 hour 30 minutes ago
I am totally watching Gumby right now. xD

~XXAnime-AngelXX 2 hours 54 minutes ago
O_o

`Bernouli 3 hours 2 minutes ago
Sucks to be him. What's wrong with youth these days. D8

~lildevil8200 3 hours 4 minutes ago
And misquoting your religion doesn't help you in an argument

^hatesyou 3 hours 9 minutes ago
Moral of that story is don't be a zealotic, prejudiced brat.

`Bernouli 3 hours 18 minutes ago
Ohh, that's why I haven't seen matthew in here for while. He got banned. Shame. 8D

Samurai Champloo wall

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~aznxenocide
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Kung Fu Jesus
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Posts: 480
1 year 10 months ago
User posted image

critiques plz?

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~fragola89
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Posts: 549
1 year 10 months ago
I like the concept...
but I don't like the font....
and the blood doesn't look so real...or well done...

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~ysb2552
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neko mania
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1 year 10 months ago
Only thing that bothers me here is that blood on the blade... its somewhat unrealistic

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~Delacour
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thisistoolongfortitle
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1 year 10 months ago
The biggest piece of blood should be under the sword, i guess? It should be on the wall.

everything else looks great and ready to submit.

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`Furikuu
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1 year 10 months ago
Not bad, but it could do with some more contrast; try making the shadows on Mugen darker. There are a lot of clean lines and the design seems pretty consistent, except for the fuzziness of the blood splatters and the background texture, which seems to have a weird 3D embossed look to it. You may want to vectorise the blood; I also think the text might work better if it was aligned along one of those arrows if you were to make one more prominent.