Spike Spiegel wall
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I really like the way it's layout~ Also, I love the coloring... I find that people here like dark stuff... But, I really love bright happy colors like this one... I think you could have vectored the filter though... That would make it Hot like none other... But that's not the theme your going for so I'll just end it here with NICE WORK~
I nearly thought that your sig didn't match your username though Oo;; It turns out I was just being blind! lol!
Anywho... I really can't see much that is wrong with the wallpaper so far. I'm loving the vector (I'm guessing it's a vector) of Spike and the colours look good too. It's kinda nice to see a Bebop wallpaper with pastelly shades on, it makes it feel more unique for some reason.
My only real crit on the wallpaper is the light blue cross-hair thing on Spike looks a little odd. I'm not convinced that it's needed there as Spike himself draws attention to that part of the screen. I just looks odd for some reason.
Anyway great wallpaper you've got going on and I'm loving the pretty colours. Great job ^^
Anywho... I really can't see much that is wrong with the wallpaper so far. I'm loving the vector (I'm guessing it's a vector) of Spike and the colours look good too. It's kinda nice to see a Bebop wallpaper with pastelly shades on, it makes it feel more unique for some reason.
My only real crit on the wallpaper is the light blue cross-hair thing on Spike looks a little odd. I'm not convinced that it's needed there as Spike himself draws attention to that part of the screen. I just looks odd for some reason.
Anyway great wallpaper you've got going on and I'm loving the pretty colours. Great job ^^
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It's a really neat and original style of wall. The character looks really good and the style you're going for is pretty amazing.
But I'm concern about the Asian writing... Not sure mixing letters and pictogram in the background is really nice looking... Especially if the pictogram are pretty blurry looking... Like you add some king of moving blur...
And I also don't really like the cross on the top of the wall. I guess it's a gun pointer but anyway I don't feel like it's really suiting the kind of wall you want to do... It add a hard look on this soft and peaceful wall...
But anyway I'm sure it will be accepted and pretty well rated! ;)
Good luck!
But I'm concern about the Asian writing... Not sure mixing letters and pictogram in the background is really nice looking... Especially if the pictogram are pretty blurry looking... Like you add some king of moving blur...
And I also don't really like the cross on the top of the wall. I guess it's a gun pointer but anyway I don't feel like it's really suiting the kind of wall you want to do... It add a hard look on this soft and peaceful wall...
But anyway I'm sure it will be accepted and pretty well rated! ;)
Good luck!
This is definitely ready for submission. Awesome concept with the vector, great texture, fantastic colors...awesome job!
I agree with above, that the crosshair looks a little out of place for some strangely odd reason. But that doesn't nessicarily mean it needs to be taken out. I'm not really sure what I think about that. X_x
I like the kanji writing in it mixed in with the english (assuming its english). Maybe add a little more to even it up with the kanji.
Just suggestions. Either way, it looks great! Good job.
I like the kanji writing in it mixed in with the english (assuming its english). Maybe add a little more to even it up with the kanji.
Just suggestions. Either way, it looks great! Good job.
This wall is really cool, the only problem I see is a couple of jagged lines on his hair. Just a bit though.
I agree with the others that it'd look better without the cross-like-things though...
Nice job ^^
I agree with the others that it'd look better without the cross-like-things though...
Nice job ^^
That's pretty godamn amazing. The only thing I'd fix is the lines comprising Spike because they seem a bit inky and the text. But don't listen to me because I'm a huge text whore and always find some flaw even in the best work. Blah. I must have OCD.
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