Noiji Itoh Wall! I think i need help...
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Well ive said already, i can probobly use some help on this. I dunno i made a day ago reall quick, and didnt realy think it throught so, as i look at it, i think it needs some tweaking, but it just seems like ive added everything i could in and stuff. Actually i know that the scan looks kind of different colored, and doesnt really match, but i just cant seem to find any color that would go with the bg, and look good with the scan. Also, i now the bg is a stock meaning that it should have some more work done to it, but i really dont now any way to make it look NOT so realistic. Trust me i tried almost everything, so i am kind of lost cos' none have helped me improve.
Yeah, here is the link for it-
Well, i am hopping to get some responses back, coz its been a while since i walled, and for one of my first walls comming back, i dont want it to suck! just to say it quickly!! XD
Thansk in advance, and please tell me, but dont criticise to much, i dont hav all this time to change every little thing, Kay! ^^
Yeah, here is the link for it-

Well, i am hopping to get some responses back, coz its been a while since i walled, and for one of my first walls comming back, i dont want it to suck! just to say it quickly!! XD
Thansk in advance, and please tell me, but dont criticise to much, i dont hav all this time to change every little thing, Kay! ^^
The wall would be nice! ^_^ No worries though...I'm sure that you'll add it soon...
#436038 Quote Report Edited by ~baka-neko64 3 years 1 month ago
Oh my bad!! ^^ i know i forgot it, but a sec later i edited, and thought now one saw it yet, but you were very fast!! XD Anyways, yeah i got it now!
3 years 1 month ago
Amazing!You are good!
hey...can you help me?
hey...can you help me?
I think that it looks really cute! ^_^ But...the background doesn't match the artwork's style...but honestly...I don't really mind that much...I think that if it looks nice...then it's okay! ^_~
But the one thing that I'd definitely change is the color of the text (which I'm sure you thought about quite a bit and just stuck with black until someone commented on it ^_~) And sorry if I was wrong...I've never been all that great at guessing...T^T
But maybe make it all glowy and stuff like the lines around the girl...That would looks nice IMO...
And just a question...do the lines around the girl serve a purpose? Like...it is a part of the series or something...or did you put them there for decorative reasons? If you used for decorative purposes...you could keep them if you want...I would just make more of...a design (? I can't find the right word at the moment T^T) Like...give it a bit more form...instead of being really random and just "there"...But you could also remove if you wish...I don't think that the wall will lose that much if you take them off ^_^
And a small thing that I noticed (that I'm sure not many will ^_^u) On the girl's head...on the left side...it seems that you extracted it with the pen tool or something similar...and then on the right side...it looks like you just erased it...I suggest using the pen tool ALL the way around since your bg is very sharp...so your image should look sharp as well...it will look better...I think... ^_^
And just another thing...I noticed that the color is a bit off too...the bg is all the same color...while the girl has a few different colors on her (like the pink for example)...I would try to blend either more color into the bg or less color on the girl...
But the wall looks really cute! Keep working! It will look amazing in the end! ^_^
But the one thing that I'd definitely change is the color of the text (which I'm sure you thought about quite a bit and just stuck with black until someone commented on it ^_~) And sorry if I was wrong...I've never been all that great at guessing...T^T
But maybe make it all glowy and stuff like the lines around the girl...That would looks nice IMO...
And just a question...do the lines around the girl serve a purpose? Like...it is a part of the series or something...or did you put them there for decorative reasons? If you used for decorative purposes...you could keep them if you want...I would just make more of...a design (? I can't find the right word at the moment T^T) Like...give it a bit more form...instead of being really random and just "there"...But you could also remove if you wish...I don't think that the wall will lose that much if you take them off ^_^
And a small thing that I noticed (that I'm sure not many will ^_^u) On the girl's head...on the left side...it seems that you extracted it with the pen tool or something similar...and then on the right side...it looks like you just erased it...I suggest using the pen tool ALL the way around since your bg is very sharp...so your image should look sharp as well...it will look better...I think... ^_^
And just another thing...I noticed that the color is a bit off too...the bg is all the same color...while the girl has a few different colors on her (like the pink for example)...I would try to blend either more color into the bg or less color on the girl...
But the wall looks really cute! Keep working! It will look amazing in the end! ^_^
#436130 Quote Report Edited by ~baka-neko64 3 years 1 month ago
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