Wolfs Rain Paper
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Hm...looks like there's too much going on...the left side would make a good wall on it's own...the middle would make a good wall on it's on...but together, they really compete for attention, and they both kinda cancel each other...you know what I mean? Anyways, the texture looks great...I'd just mess with the texture on the cliff sides more, since it looks less "painted" than the rest of the wall.
2 years 2 months ago
Ok, looking good.
Wallpaper 1: Seperate them more so their fingers are just about to touch... like the famous painting of God and Adam by Michelangelo... you may have to make her more horizontal to make it work. And put them more in the center. The dark lense flair is weird, but cool... either soften it, move it, or get rid of it.
Wallpaper 2: Your rocks need more shading. Make your lines more like the artist's: blacker, heavier, more uneven. Lower the whole rock, give them more head room. And move the whole thing to the right, give them more elbow room too. And get some text in there... same color, brownish, yellowish, and desert like. Or make it like the little bit of text in the upper right corner.
Wallpaper 1: Seperate them more so their fingers are just about to touch... like the famous painting of God and Adam by Michelangelo... you may have to make her more horizontal to make it work. And put them more in the center. The dark lense flair is weird, but cool... either soften it, move it, or get rid of it.
Wallpaper 2: Your rocks need more shading. Make your lines more like the artist's: blacker, heavier, more uneven. Lower the whole rock, give them more head room. And move the whole thing to the right, give them more elbow room too. And get some text in there... same color, brownish, yellowish, and desert like. Or make it like the little bit of text in the upper right corner.
Wall 1: I think having the hands almost touching is an awesome idea. As it is I don't really care for the semi-transparant thing you have going and wonder what you were trying to portray by doing it. I love the painting feel to it. Good job~
Wall 2: I also think it should be lowered just a tad. As for moving it to the right I'm not sure you can without throwing the weight off and making the picture seem odd. Maybe that's just me though, go ahead and try it. I really like the background and the deserty, dusty feel to it. Awesome job on that.
They're both awesome! I hope my comments help ^^
Wall 2: I also think it should be lowered just a tad. As for moving it to the right I'm not sure you can without throwing the weight off and making the picture seem odd. Maybe that's just me though, go ahead and try it. I really like the background and the deserty, dusty feel to it. Awesome job on that.
They're both awesome! I hope my comments help ^^
Well, i'm not so good to give opinions, but i hope i be usefull for something...xD
WP1: it's a really good idea, but i think you could put the couple more in the middle of the wall...
WP2: hm, i think that's very good, i really like the BG.
WP1: it's a really good idea, but i think you could put the couple more in the middle of the wall...
WP2: hm, i think that's very good, i really like the BG.
2 years 2 months ago
ichigoxkissWall 1: I think having the hands almost touching is an awesome idea. As it is I don't really care for the semi-transparant thing you have going and wonder what you were trying to portray by doing it. I love the painting feel to it. Good job~
Wall 2: I also think it should be lowered just a tad. As for moving it to the right I'm not sure you can without throwing the weight off and making the picture seem odd. Maybe that's just me though, go ahead and try it. I really like the background and the deserty, dusty feel to it. Awesome job on that.
They're both awesome! I hope my comments help ^^
For this wall 1- I wasnt trying to potray anything, I just took the picture from the manga and colored it in, the hand was already transparent, so I left it as is... ^___^ but thank you for your ideas!! Ill take them into consideration
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