Hey there again. To those of you who reploedd to my first post on Session Zero, thank you very much. You all were very right; I needed to add more creativity and effort to my walls. So, I tried again, and I think I did MUCH better. Now, it might not be as breath-taking as some of the other walls I've seen on here, but I think It may be suitable. What I want to know is what you guys think. Did I really improve? And if so, is it still even enough. Be honest; I want to know what I need to fix. Thank you so very much! http://img65.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bw17zb1.jpg

Okay, for starters the font you chose is too big and it's ugly.

The image you used was badly extracted, the lines are jagged.

The background could be better. It'd look better if you put the character in an environment. At the very least, add some textures to the background. Right now, (whether it's true or not) it doesn't look like you gave the background much thought.

It's a good start, but it definitely has room for improvement.