__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
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Yeah i know.. christmas was 5 days ago ^^'
actually, this one was done on the 24th, but i didn't post it up until now [probably because i just joined ^^'] but yeah.. please comment so i could improve ^^' thankies all~
actually, this one was done on the 24th, but i didn't post it up until now [probably because i just joined ^^'] but yeah.. please comment so i could improve ^^' thankies all~
Yay^^!Well,I will admit it is very cute.Though there's something with the eyes that I just can't quite put my finger on,*sigh* oh well.It also seems that you neglected the neck and shoulders a bit in terms of line darkness.Other than that I think you're doin great!Keep up the good work!
Its so cute. some eyes have pupoles if that was wut i think he was trying. k i can't talk, ok. i think OPHi3-TRiC3 was trying to say that the eyes could have pupoles. so anime has them some don't. so you can add them if you want to^_^;
Who ever said i don't love speed lied!
Its cute but not enough color or shading but you did really good
Thank you for all the comments ^^
i can see all the mistakes that i've made ^^'
gotta remember those and try to do better next time ^w^
i can see all the mistakes that i've made ^^'
gotta remember those and try to do better next time ^w^
Wow, this is quite pro looking! I like the colors~ The two little shines on her right eye are in the wrong direction (should be on the other side because the light source is... coming from there...). I also think her face is a tad pentagon-ish, and think you should round it out a bit. Overall, very nicely done, and I would like to see more~!
Oh yeah i forgot about that when i did the eyes >___>
thanks soo much for pointing it out luna-san~ ^^
*off to fix it*
thanks soo much for pointing it out luna-san~ ^^
*off to fix it*
Yay, it's cute! I like the eyes the way they are now ^_^
I'm just looking and pretending to be cute...
2 years 10 months ago
She's kawaii.. the lines in her eyes are litlle wierd, but I like her ^^
Thanks chibionpu~ ^w^
deathnote: thankies~ ^^ btw, what lines were you talking about?? did you mean thoes horizontal lines..?? ^^'
deathnote: thankies~ ^^ btw, what lines were you talking about?? did you mean thoes horizontal lines..?? ^^'
Now thats just too darn cute ... ^^~
well done with the colouring, your cell shading skills are quite good, good choice of colour as well, green and red work really well together xD. oh and i love the blushes, looks vv nice. ^^
uhh, critique? not much really... the neck is just a tad too narrow, and the sunspot reflections on the eyes should both be going in the same direction, the rest is all fine!
PS. like the scanline effect as well xD
well done with the colouring, your cell shading skills are quite good, good choice of colour as well, green and red work really well together xD. oh and i love the blushes, looks vv nice. ^^
uhh, critique? not much really... the neck is just a tad too narrow, and the sunspot reflections on the eyes should both be going in the same direction, the rest is all fine!
PS. like the scanline effect as well xD
Kawaii..how long did it take you to do it. the colours/mood and concept seems to perfectly fit together
It´s soo cute, I wouldn´t change anything, it´s excellent ^^
2 years 10 months ago
Cute picture, you colored this on the computer? I like the coloring, and the detail in the eyes. But i do agree with some previous comments that it seemed like you neglected the neck and shoulders. Otherwise, good work!
The Character has a "100 yard stare" it doesn't feel like it's looking at you the viewer...other than that there isn't really anything else that can be done to improve it because it looks bloody well fine.
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