Ok i have tried to give up on this wallpaper but for some reason it keeps on calling me so i started fixing it if it still doesnt make it im going to keep on trying.
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Nice concept, but its too darks and the letters behind, dont look good

but continue, i had one idea of that kind too :P

Yeah i had a feeling tht it was to dark but i want tht poem on there it goes with the wall so i will try to fix it thanks

Yup i agree with Danalm it's too dark.

Try some blends because the concept is realy nice. Also if you can make the text readeable it would be fantastic.

Conception really is great, I agree with everyone that it's too dark, but not whole of it, I think it would be good enough to lihgt up Ichigo's face a bit, and point him out on that way, maybe not whole face, but to make some kind of contrast and to get more attention on him.
I agree that it would be great if text could be readable, looks cool in the background... overall it's really good wall ^_^

Freaking sweet wall idea. i've been trying to think of a wall to show ichigo and his hallow within. i like your idea.

yeah text needs to be readable, but i also like the darkness of if. at the same time ichigo's face should be lit up a bit more because he is the "light side" while the hallow is the "dark side" so i don't think you need to/should lighten up the hallow's face.

This wallpaper is plain awesome. Like most people said above, the concept is great, and it has been executed flawlessly. Now, there are some minor details that you should work on:

1. I don't agree with the people who say the wallpaper's too dark. I actually prefer it that way, and I'm sure a lot of people do too.

2. The quality of the texts on the left, and the credit. They look too blurred. Once you give them a higher quality, and whiten them a bit more, so they look a bit brighter, you'll have finished your job.

Well, that's all I got to say. Good job, and keep it up.