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lemon-AID wallpaper...bad pun -_-
More swirls? I dont see any "more" swirls lols. Add a lot more! MORE MORE MORE! heheh theres that void at the back of Shinn bottom right corner, add more swirls to cover that up! Add maybe add texture to the BG. Goodluck with it!
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Texture that fits a textured version of this wall? still looking. as to the untextured one, well, i did add some swirls. don't know if this wall still looks good. more swirls
Soo...nobody's commenting anymore. should i take it that this is coming to a close? it'd be nice to get more people to say something about my wallpaper but i suppose if those of you who had already posted under this topic have been heard by me and stuff, i guess this wall might just survive submission?
I feel bad getting any paper at all for this post but i really really seriously very much need a couple of okays for different people...okay, maybe even just one of you. if this wallpaper is good enough then i shall submit it but right now PLZ respond...anyone? o.o
Sorry again...like I said before I haven't been around.
Hmm I like I like... now about the shadow behind "Lemonade Anyone?". I say don't make it too blurry and also make the shadow closer to the text itself.
and when I said different colored shadows behind Shinn I meant like when you make a shadow that's the same shape as Shinn and add it behind him, then another shadow behind that that's a different color, and then another. So that wouldbe 3 different shadows behind him but instead of 1 color making 3 different colors...I hope I explained that @_@
Hmm I like I like... now about the shadow behind "Lemonade Anyone?". I say don't make it too blurry and also make the shadow closer to the text itself.
and when I said different colored shadows behind Shinn I meant like when you make a shadow that's the same shape as Shinn and add it behind him, then another shadow behind that that's a different color, and then another. So that wouldbe 3 different shadows behind him but instead of 1 color making 3 different colors...I hope I explained that @_@
I dont like the jagged edges of the curves. but other than that, nothing really bothers me much.
Make the outlines smoother. especially because it looks a bit blurry too.
about the lemon glass.. i'm not fond of that outline gray color. some other color would probably be better.. white maybe...
don't use drop shadow on the text.
Good luck!
Make the outlines smoother. especially because it looks a bit blurry too.
about the lemon glass.. i'm not fond of that outline gray color. some other color would probably be better.. white maybe...
don't use drop shadow on the text.
Good luck!
Smoother edges, get rid of drop shadow (but i think then the text blends into the bg =/) and lemon glass outline...you mean the glass of lemonade...but the outline isn't gray o.o?? i'm kinda confused.
I tried fixing the stuff...i don't think it turned out completely successful though... without drop shadow, the text really faded into the outline-less look of the bg so i tried outlining it...not so sure the exact color of it works right now...tell me what you guys think! this is how it looks right now.
Hmm, lesse here...
I think you should still add a shadow, but in a different way.
1) Press CTRL and click on the layers "Lemonade Anyone?"
2)make a new layer and fill it with black (if you want something a little lighter go ahead but try black first)
3) Deselect now and move the layer behind the words "Lemonade Anyone?" and nudge it a bit so it looks like a shadow
if it's too sharp, do a blur. and maybe you could tone down the opacity if you want.
and I like the black outline on the glass better >.O
whoohoo!
I think you should still add a shadow, but in a different way.
1) Press CTRL and click on the layers "Lemonade Anyone?"
2)make a new layer and fill it with black (if you want something a little lighter go ahead but try black first)
3) Deselect now and move the layer behind the words "Lemonade Anyone?" and nudge it a bit so it looks like a shadow
if it's too sharp, do a blur. and maybe you could tone down the opacity if you want.
and I like the black outline on the glass better >.O
whoohoo!
I like no shadow better. it looks fine
the glass, the outline of the glass is black. white would be better, i think.
the glass, the outline of the glass is black. white would be better, i think.
I like the no shadow better you can see the words more clearly. The only things I'd try doing to it would be to:
1. Make the glass white.
2. Make the text a bit bigger.
Great Wall!
1. Make the glass white.
2. Make the text a bit bigger.
Great Wall!
Every time you make a choice you are turning the central part of you that chooses, into something a little different from what it was before.--C.S. Lewis
>< update. improved... hopefully. i guess i'm going with the outlined title version when i submit. final round of comments for this newest version then i think this can be counted as wrapped up!
Looks good You've done a great job on this wall. Nice and simple! Yet still a great wall I don't like busy things. Good Luck!!!
Every time you make a choice you are turning the central part of you that chooses, into something a little different from what it was before.--C.S. Lewis
If you want to clean up the scan just a little. that maybe fine too :D
good
good
2 years 5 months ago
To bad i'm to late to write a helpful comment, but i think you made a great wall here. i can't wait to make a comment on it after it got accepted. i think it is done and would be ready for submission, just a little cleaning like mentioned and it is ready. *think*
anyways good wall i like it a lot.
anyways good wall i like it a lot.
