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Castle In the sky
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2 years 2 months ago
Okay this wallpaper got rejected and I need your help and suggestions to make it the best it can be. Keep in mind I want to keep the windows so if I can make them better tell me.
YAY LAPUTA~~~
Okay, a few things I see here:
- The extraction could use a little work around the characters
- The 'Laputa' text... you could change the font to match the 'Castle in the Sky' font and move it down a bit
- Try moving your signature to the bottom left instead of the bottom right so it doens't cover the image
If you fix those things, it'll look really good! I think the windows are fine :3
Okay, a few things I see here:
- The extraction could use a little work around the characters
- The 'Laputa' text... you could change the font to match the 'Castle in the Sky' font and move it down a bit
- Try moving your signature to the bottom left instead of the bottom right so it doens't cover the image
If you fix those things, it'll look really good! I think the windows are fine :3
Well, the whole background itself is sortof messy. Maybe you shoudl try creating a better night sky / background. So, basically your background looks like a bunch of burshing and elements slapped on to each other. Try making is cleaner and have some sortof pattern.
Mmm looks like you used some brushes to do the bg and then aplied some artistic filter...if that's the case, get rid of the filter...i think that will help...
the extraction needs some work...
nice start ;)
good luck !
the extraction needs some work...
nice start ;)
good luck !
2 years 2 months ago
Thank you so much guys! Yes for the grass and swirly brushes I applyed a filter so the wouldn't look so pixely. I'll make a differn't backround and change that Luputa text. On to working on the extraction!
2 years 2 months ago
Alright, I hope the extraction is at least a little bit better because I went back and extracted the whole image again. I did something differn't with the backround so, I hope thats better in some parts, I didn't over do it on brushes. Oh and in the end the old text didn't work with this backround so I changed both to the Laputa text.
1.-Too BusyTikalhammyOkay this wallpaper got rejected and I need your help and suggestions to make it the best it can be. Keep in mind I want to keep the windows so if I can make them better tell me.
2.-Characters aren't extracted well
3.-Nothing cues me as to what series this is
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Yahoogles, it's Castle in the Sky!
Err...no offense, but I personally don't think the background matches with the scan/the movie. I mean, the robot has GRASS on him and look at where the background is. You should make them at the castle or something.
good luck
Err...no offense, but I personally don't think the background matches with the scan/the movie. I mean, the robot has GRASS on him and look at where the background is. You should make them at the castle or something.
good luck
2 years 2 months ago
Inuspalyahoogles, it's Castle in the Sky!
Err...no offense, but I personally don't think the background matches with the scan/the movie. I mean, the robot has GRASS on him and look at where the background is. You should make them at the castle or something.
good luck
he he... that makes since! I'll make them at the castle, like in the scan ^_^.
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