School Rumble WP
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#371311 Quote Report Edited by ~indra-symfonia 2 years 2 months ago
2 years 2 months ago
Very nice! I really like it and can't find anything wrong, but there are two things. The grass seems out of place to me, I think you should remove it, and make your signature a little bit smaller. Thats all I think ^_^.
What about some more abstract tech/pop art brushing? that might look good
Not bad.. not bad at all.. it looks really nice.. but for me.. black and whites are boring.. (just me though).. uhmm.. your wallpaper doesnt look boring.. it just looks like you need to add something to comple the wallpaper.. i dont know wat it is.. but thats what i think.. the outlines are good.. theyre smooth.. not jaggy.. the buildings/houses looks a bit weird.. fix some of it.. well. .yea.. it looks really nice.. good luck!
Looks good. I like my walls like this. Nice and clean. Its ezer to find my files on my desktop. ^_^
~imPanda
~imPanda
I like it alot but it is bland. Why not try putting highlights on certain parts of the characters. For instance. Vector eyes on them and certain parts of their clothing. Just give it more color. As for the rest I like it. But the characters need to stand out more and they aren't right now... ^-^;
I like it so far! Awesome vectoring here! Sky is empty so think about wat you should add there. Maybe streak lines or stars or abstract clouds watever. So far I really like how this looks, all you need is tweakin and addin stuff and u'll get this submitted for sure. Love the grey look! goodjob!
2 years 2 months ago
Very nice! I really like it and can't find anything wrong, but there are two things. The grass seems out of place to me, I think you should remove it, and make your signature a little bit smaller. Thats all I think ^_^.
as ~Tikalhammy said..
i dont see any other problem there..
good luck!
-CagalliYamato.♥
A bit monochromatic now but once you add the abstract stuff it may look good. Very clean vector nice job.
Everyone thanks for your comment & suggestion, i fix the wallpaper now.
• Looks fine to me… You might want to use some darker BG but it really isn’t necessary :P . I like your wallpaper as it is.
Looks pretty good, but the sky seems a little empty. Try adding some text and see if it's good.
I think you shoudl move your signature down a bit.
Good luck!
I think you shoudl move your signature down a bit.
Good luck!
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