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new wallpaper...
da thing next to the big moon is a moon.. lol -- ~gat
i think this new one looks empty.. doesnt it?
should i blur the edges of the hair..
i tried it but looked really bad..
ahhh.. i dont know wat to do!
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I believe you have posted this wallpaper on a thread already, please don't multipost threads.
http://www.animepaper.net/forums/Session-Zero/25158/ here's the link.
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http://www.animepaper.net/forums/Session-Zero/25158/ here's the link.
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Ahh. watever.. ders too many stuff on the other one already..
so. anyways...
dis is da new one.. any suggestions?
i want to put some text on the left part of da wallp.. but i dont know wat to put.. help me..
so. anyways...
dis is da new one.. any suggestions?
i want to put some text on the left part of da wallp.. but i dont know wat to put.. help me..
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Hm... it doesnt actually feel empty but its just pitch dark
y not put the mountain features like wat you did with the top half
or if that doesnt work try some text... hope that helps, good luck!
y not put the mountain features like wat you did with the top half
or if that doesnt work try some text... hope that helps, good luck!
Yeah, it's be nice if you put some more texture into it, or something to brighten it up ^^ It doesn't look like you did much editing to the image at the moment, that's all, but keep working on it~!
Very nice indeed... I love that picture. though... I'm very curious if it had a text on it.
Let faith take it's own path...
Everything is good except for the over use of sparklies, the blurred cross. the lense glare next tot he moon and the overly bright moon,
i thinkyou should darken up the moon just a bit, atleast the left side,
then, maybe make the top of the wings just a bit more visible. lighter.
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i thinkyou should darken up the moon just a bit, atleast the left side,
then, maybe make the top of the wings just a bit more visible. lighter.
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blu3angleverything is good except for the over use of sparklies, the blurred cross. the lense glare next tot he moon and the overly bright moon,
i thinkyou should darken up the moon just a bit, atleast the left side,
then, maybe make the top of the wings just a bit more visible. lighter.
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mm... you have alot of knowledge on walls... I want to see more on yours. LOL..anyway good suggestions.
Let faith take it's own path...
there you go.. this is da new one..
i darken the moon a lil.. i deleted the little moon thing beside it..
i erased some of the sparkles..
i added some texts..
added somethings on the mountain..
i made the wings lighter...
anything else do i need to do to make this wallp better?
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Wow that really helps...looks way better (good comments blu)
hmmm all i can see is that mabey you should brighten the text...mabey im not sure,
hmmm all i can see is that mabey you should brighten the text...mabey im not sure,
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Hey that looks very nice, maybe add some mist in the background?
I think, there's a really dark outline on the right side of the moon..is it just me?
the left side is also pretty unsmooth, but i don't think it's that bad, just make sure the right side is not so outlined.
I think you can experiment with the text and maybe make it just a tiny bit brighter, i see the small text is not very readable, but perhaps that's your intention.
And, I Just Noticed This, But i Think There's A Pretty Important problem with the extraction on the hair.
there are places near the bottom , where i think the hair color is almost the same as the original scan bg, so it's hard to tell, but i'm sure some of those spaces should be extracted. i think...
I will try to show you the places when i update this post, but just as a heads up.
Next, the sparkles has potential to be dimmed down just a bit, because you reallly don't want too much attention on it.
And i would say. spread them around the wing area too a little, just a tiny bit, not so much on the bg.
But the size variation is done pretty well.
C:good improvements^^
PS. lol, i think i'm saying too much
the left side is also pretty unsmooth, but i don't think it's that bad, just make sure the right side is not so outlined.
I think you can experiment with the text and maybe make it just a tiny bit brighter, i see the small text is not very readable, but perhaps that's your intention.
And, I Just Noticed This, But i Think There's A Pretty Important problem with the extraction on the hair.
there are places near the bottom , where i think the hair color is almost the same as the original scan bg, so it's hard to tell, but i'm sure some of those spaces should be extracted. i think...
I will try to show you the places when i update this post, but just as a heads up.
Next, the sparkles has potential to be dimmed down just a bit, because you reallly don't want too much attention on it.
And i would say. spread them around the wing area too a little, just a tiny bit, not so much on the bg.
But the size variation is done pretty well.
C:good improvements^^
PS. lol, i think i'm saying too much
Oh no.. some areas on the hair is not part of the scans background..
i know wat your talking about.. i saw it too.. and i looked at it.. its really the hair.. look at the image again.. imagine if i erased white stuff on the hair near the neck and the bottom.. wouldnt it look weird.. look at some part of the hair. .theres alot of white areas too.. its just the shine on the hair.. lol
ok.. dats too many explanations.. hehe
heres the new version..
i fixed the text.. and i toned the sparkles down a lil bit..
i know wat your talking about.. i saw it too.. and i looked at it.. its really the hair.. look at the image again.. imagine if i erased white stuff on the hair near the neck and the bottom.. wouldnt it look weird.. look at some part of the hair. .theres alot of white areas too.. its just the shine on the hair.. lol
ok.. dats too many explanations.. hehe
heres the new version..
i fixed the text.. and i toned the sparkles down a lil bit..
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Lol, personally for the lighting on the text, maybe something in between^^
anyways, don't mind me.
yeah i know what you're talking about for the highlight , but some spaces on the bottom i still have doubt on, because it kinda ends there and i'm just really not sure.
could that be the clothing? or something?
because hair definitely can't end in a straight line
other wise, i think you can try and submit^^
anyways, don't mind me.
yeah i know what you're talking about for the highlight , but some spaces on the bottom i still have doubt on, because it kinda ends there and i'm just really not sure.
could that be the clothing? or something?
because hair definitely can't end in a straight line
other wise, i think you can try and submit^^
Ooh.. those are hair too... it just goes to different direction... the scans background color is white..
ok .. heres the pic..
is my wallp fine now?
ok .. heres the pic..
is my wallp fine now?
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