My First Wall.
Well...here's my first animepaper wall. The background is all stock photos and effects. Yeah...well, please tell me what you guys think about it?
http://www.geocities.com/gingko_l/elfwall1024.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/gingko_l/elfwall1024.jpg
4 years 2 months ago
Liar, that's too freaking awesome to be your first.
Ahhh, very good photo manipulation, errr, I would suggest add some highlight maybe some other elements to the wallpaper, maybe some fairy lights or something. I think it's really good though, the scan is extracted nicely too so maybe just add a few decorative elements it will look better. Hell it's a lot better than my first wall lol.
Good job.
Good job.
Hmmm...well the whole bg is all that blurred up stuff. A nature scene would do much better.
The left side of the wallpaper need a little more weight to balance the right side. Perhaps add more words, shapes, etc. on the left side.
It's nice texture and composition-wise, but the colours are too intense. If you look at the girl's skirt, the main green colour is quite pastellish. You should try and alter your background so it matches that more.. at the moment it looks very acidic and the yellow and cyan bits on the right make me think you've used too much aggressive blend moding :P
Nice but something about the background seems off. So I guess my suggestion is to change the background, the picture and the words you included are good though.
It would be nice if you had some variation at the bottom for example so the green can blend in with something. Let it fade to some bright color.
Try it anyways, it can be good or it'll be worse. ;)
Try it anyways, it can be good or it'll be worse. ;)
Well...here's the new and (hopefully) improved version...Yup. My sister had actually already told me that the cyan bits were strange but I had been too tired to care. It's now less bright. The new version is also bigger.
Oh, and to Nination : Am so not a liar. This isn't my 'first-ever-haven't-made-other-walls-before' wall. But it is my first wall that I'm putting on Anime Paper. Maybe I should have said it differently or something...

Oh, and to Nination : Am so not a liar. This isn't my 'first-ever-haven't-made-other-walls-before' wall. But it is my first wall that I'm putting on Anime Paper. Maybe I should have said it differently or something...

Hrmmm...It's a good start, but I would suggest looking back to the original graphic for some ideas to build on. Green is the dominant color, but it's offset by the peach of her skin as well as the fire in her hands. there are also some subtle blues working in her eyes and on details of the dress. Right now, even in your reworked version, the green is pretty overwhelming. My eyes are almost forced to the character illustration for a rest. maybe try to pull some of the subtle colors and use them to offset the intensity of the green? Regardless, for your first try you've done quite well. You should be proud of yourself! goodness knows my first walls weren't half this good. :neko:
This is the very final version (hopefully).
There are now some added branches on the side, so that it isn't as green.
http://us.share.geocities.com/gingko_l/elfwall.jpg
There are now some added branches on the side, so that it isn't as green.
http://us.share.geocities.com/gingko_l/elfwall.jpg
4 years 2 months ago
Wow. Great Job, it's a very nice wall.
It's a shame it's not 1600x1400.
Keep up the good work.
It's a shame it's not 1600x1400.
Keep up the good work.
I can complain about this one. Very nice job.
This is a very good wallpaper!
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...This the first that you ever do?
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...Sorry my english!
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...This the first that you ever do?
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...Sorry my english!
4 years 2 months ago
the last one didnt open ~ but great work x___X// ~ so cutie elf ^^
=__=' hm~ first ?~ okey, that better than everything i've made xD









