Surreal Lain
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Hmm this wall was rejected due to composition issues. Honestly I'm not quite sure what to piece together from that comment so I hope I can gather some feedback and possibly anything that can help towards correcting any mistakes.

I think maybe the problem lies in the fact that its too congested, but thats what the piece is about congestion and overall craziness. So anyway any feedback would be great. TY.

I think maybe the problem lies in the fact that its too congested, but thats what the piece is about congestion and overall craziness. So anyway any feedback would be great. TY.
#300068 Quote Report Edited by ~Alucardian 3 years 6 months ago
The only thing i cant see is it is alittle busy like you said other than that i dont see anything wrong. nice work.
3 years 6 months ago
Please provide a version in the original size. To avoid that your wallpaper gets resized by the server try to upload it to http://imageshack.us/ and then copy the 'Thumbnail for forums (1)' link here.
Well I like it's craziness...but the scan in the middle really ruines it. If it were vectored the whole piece would really go togethor. Also right now it's only one color so maybe you should try mixing other colors?
and good job on the wall~
and good job on the wall~
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