__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
dont know what this is from but heres my wallpaper
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Obviously you did'nt make this..
you've just replace the name of the artist..
It's totally rejected when you submit it.
and also the background is kinda blurry.
and the chick looks like floating.
you've just replace the name of the artist..
It's totally rejected when you submit it.
and also the background is kinda blurry.
and the chick looks like floating.
Hmmm nice but the girl doesnt fit with the background
I did so make this wallpaper. for those of you who dont belive me here is proof includeing the images i used i am not including the extra images that i added to the girl but i will put them on here if you still dont belive me.
i did remake this wallpaper to include a thank you that i meant to include in the first place but got side tracked in doing so. thanks for the remider people who think i riped off my wallpaper. anyway here it is my wallpaper remade.
i did remake this wallpaper to include a thank you that i meant to include in the first place but got side tracked in doing so. thanks for the remider people who think i riped off my wallpaper. anyway here it is my wallpaper remade.
Lady Raven A.k.a. Death's Seraphim ~The Angel Who's Wings Are Only Visible In The Dark~
3 years 5 months ago
Four things i found about the girl that are noticable if you look hard enogh ;)
-the roses you add look weirdon the left side, like they were cut off
-the heart on her cheek looks weird, it's to squaer-ish, nevertheles it should be rotated a bit to the right so the top of the heart is aligned with her eye
-you coloured the ribon to purple on the right side of her hair, you should have done the same on the left side (yes there is a small strip visable, look at the original image)
-the tatoo you added is nice but doesn't "blend" with her skin as her skin is dark light (looking from the left side) so the tatoo should also be lighter on the right side
the bg look fine to me no comment there
the font just doesn't fith there it looks skinny already but the bg strips make it look even weirder-er
-the roses you add look weirdon the left side, like they were cut off
-the heart on her cheek looks weird, it's to squaer-ish, nevertheles it should be rotated a bit to the right so the top of the heart is aligned with her eye
-you coloured the ribon to purple on the right side of her hair, you should have done the same on the left side (yes there is a small strip visable, look at the original image)
-the tatoo you added is nice but doesn't "blend" with her skin as her skin is dark light (looking from the left side) so the tatoo should also be lighter on the right side
the bg look fine to me no comment there
the font just doesn't fith there it looks skinny already but the bg strips make it look even weirder-er
What program are you using for this?
Why?
Lady Raven A.k.a. Death's Seraphim ~The Angel Who's Wings Are Only Visible In The Dark~
Your text seems to be too unclean and very low quality.
The chick really doesnt fit with the bg
just think of a beatuful and lighter background..
why you will match the forest w/ a black somethi'n some'in design.
search for another background.
but you know what it will be beautiful if you change the bg
or invent a bg.
just think of a beatuful and lighter background..
why you will match the forest w/ a black somethi'n some'in design.
search for another background.
but you know what it will be beautiful if you change the bg
or invent a bg.
The chick really doesnt fit with the bg
just think of a beatuful and lighter background..
why you will match the forest w/ a black somethi'n some'in design.
search for another background.
but you know what it will be beautiful if you change the bg
or invent a bg.
just think of a beatuful and lighter background..
why you will match the forest w/ a black somethi'n some'in design.
search for another background.
but you know what it will be beautiful if you change the bg
or invent a bg.
K, here is the thing youre going to need to do something with your image. dont flap a c4d render behind something and change the opacity.It looks very bad . Now, get out some brushs and try something. Just mess around until you find something you think looks good, then keep messing around some more.dont be afraid to experiment. Thats what session zero is for.
Yea, I don't think the chick matches with the background. She'd look better with like a castle behind her or something, a darkish castle. Or maybe it's just me with teh castle thing, but that's what came to my mind. If you do keep the forest background, the colors don't seem to match with the girl and it's low quality, especially the flower part; it has lines through it and it doesn't look right. But that would be a nice background, just the darker flowers, without the forest thing. I want to see the improved version so keep it up! :D
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Nice wallpaper so far. I have no problem with the background vs subject, but the image itself does, as previously stated, have a lot of artifacts in it. Even the original pic for the background has a lot of jagged edges. I would try to find the same picture (or something similar), but larger and higher quality to start with.
The main problem I'm having with the girl is that she is so saturated and has a lot of light on her for being in that setting. Notice how her highlights are lighter than any of the highlights in the background. I would try to either darken her or add some light to the background. Maybe even put a few shadows on her from the trees. I mean, it would make sense that there are trees out of the frame that would be casting shadows on her.
Don't get discouraged, though. I think it looks really nice and I'd like to see it even better. :)
The main problem I'm having with the girl is that she is so saturated and has a lot of light on her for being in that setting. Notice how her highlights are lighter than any of the highlights in the background. I would try to either darken her or add some light to the background. Maybe even put a few shadows on her from the trees. I mean, it would make sense that there are trees out of the frame that would be casting shadows on her.
Don't get discouraged, though. I think it looks really nice and I'd like to see it even better. :)
OK WHATEVER I GIVE UP ON THIS ONE. BYE.
Lady Raven A.k.a. Death's Seraphim ~The Angel Who's Wings Are Only Visible In The Dark~
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