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3 years 5 months ago
First sorry to start a new topic but the other one was too messed up with versions, questions; so ...
Here's the improved one :
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7042/vietsaya0162zh.jpg
Tell me if it's good enough now.
Here's the improved one :
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/7042/vietsaya0162zh.jpg
Tell me if it's good enough now.
Hey he yi didnt see your previous thread .. so ill comment on this ^_^
ok.. furst i'll start with this: when i saw your wallpaper i felt like theres 2 wallies not one.. the blood and the pictures didnt fit 2gother i like the idea but maybe you should add more effects to blood to make it fit with your bg ^_^
u 4got to add the signture >_< dunt forget that.. and use anothe color i guess white dunt fit with it
and aout te text i think it would be better if you remove it if you want it make i guess it would be better if you changed the position
one last thing i didnt feel the blood with this color maybe it would be better if you change it ^_^
thats my opinions ... good luck ^_^
ok.. furst i'll start with this: when i saw your wallpaper i felt like theres 2 wallies not one.. the blood and the pictures didnt fit 2gother i like the idea but maybe you should add more effects to blood to make it fit with your bg ^_^
u 4got to add the signture >_< dunt forget that.. and use anothe color i guess white dunt fit with it
and aout te text i think it would be better if you remove it if you want it make i guess it would be better if you changed the position
one last thing i didnt feel the blood with this color maybe it would be better if you change it ^_^
thats my opinions ... good luck ^_^
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Alright I think you are on the wrong and on the right pass. What you got right now is not going to work with what you want. What you should do is actualy have her not in picture frames, BUT on TV screens as if it was a security room and she is about to destroy the camera, or something like that, you think on it. Get what am trying to say? Good luck.
Alright I think you are on the wrong and on the right pass. What you got right now is not going to work with what you want. What you should do is actualy have her not in picture frames, BUT on TV screens as if it was a security room and she is about to destroy the camera, or something like that, you think on it. Get what am trying to say? Good luck.
3 years 5 months ago
I improved the blood :
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6003/vietsaya0234aj.jpg
It's a good idea the tv screens, i'll see what i can do for that but i'm a novice and i don't really know what tool or effect to use to do that; if you could give me a few hints on what tutorial or tool i've to search.
Thank you.
Edit of the blood :
http://img469.imageshack.us/img469/2319/vietsaya0257kk.jpg
I've done a more dark blood version.
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6003/vietsaya0234aj.jpg
It's a good idea the tv screens, i'll see what i can do for that but i'm a novice and i don't really know what tool or effect to use to do that; if you could give me a few hints on what tutorial or tool i've to search.
Thank you.
Edit of the blood :
http://img469.imageshack.us/img469/2319/vietsaya0257kk.jpg
I've done a more dark blood version.
#325365 Quote Report Edited by ~Saka4Rob10 3 years 5 months ago
I don't think the text is really necessary, unless you want to keep it, change the font.
To do the tv screen thing, you could add some scanlines to the pictures make the tv effct. As for the tv, try finding a picture of a tv and then vector it. Then you could just paste the pictures of Saya on to each one of the tvs. It's kind of hard to explain but that's what I thought you should do.
To do the tv screen thing, you could add some scanlines to the pictures make the tv effct. As for the tv, try finding a picture of a tv and then vector it. Then you could just paste the pictures of Saya on to each one of the tvs. It's kind of hard to explain but that's what I thought you should do.
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Well, the blood on the second & third version looks like wax to me :)
3 years 5 months ago
I tried to improve the blood :
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/78/vietsaya0307ll.jpg
I'm looking about tv screens but in that case i'll have to change the backgroung.
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/78/vietsaya0307ll.jpg
I'm looking about tv screens but in that case i'll have to change the backgroung.
#325497 Quote Report Edited by ~Saka4Rob10 3 years 5 months ago
Fix the text and I think the blood is too messy
3 years 5 months ago
I'm becoming mad with this blood ...
Here's what i've got and i'm thinking of submitting it like this ... :
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/6489/vietsaya0345ik.jpg
I made an other version with darkened blood.
Here's what i've got and i'm thinking of submitting it like this ... :
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/6489/vietsaya0345ik.jpg
I made an other version with darkened blood.
#325581 Quote Report Edited by ~Saka4Rob10 3 years 5 months ago
Try some like...layering blood with different blending options
clean theeeee screenshotssss
use thisss tutorial!!
http://www.imanimetions.net/tutorial/tutorial.php?view=clean
btw...why does the border look eaten away?
TExt color and font doesnt fit. why curly font? and why blue?
I think you should get more..grunge, so the no-so-great-table won't show as much. layer some good grunge-like textures :D
clean theeeee screenshotssss
use thisss tutorial!!
http://www.imanimetions.net/tutorial/tutorial.php?view=clean
btw...why does the border look eaten away?
TExt color and font doesnt fit. why curly font? and why blue?
I think you should get more..grunge, so the no-so-great-table won't show as much. layer some good grunge-like textures :D
My thoughts:
- Get rid of this blood and use another brush. It is to messy and I think this brush it's not actually a blood brush, it's just a splatter brush...blood doesn't look like this. I found a nice brush on deviantart called somethind like shadows brush.... If you find it it will be better to use it. If you do want to keep you actuall blood then you have to lose the drop shadow (it makes it look like it's some how floating) and also edit the blood manually (by brushing) to give it depth, the bevel is not enough. I do advise you to look up another blood brush.
- Desaturate everything except the red and go for a black withe red wall. Also enhance the contrast on the photos with a levels adjustment. I think it will give the wall a nice look.
Good luck!^^
- Get rid of this blood and use another brush. It is to messy and I think this brush it's not actually a blood brush, it's just a splatter brush...blood doesn't look like this. I found a nice brush on deviantart called somethind like shadows brush.... If you find it it will be better to use it. If you do want to keep you actuall blood then you have to lose the drop shadow (it makes it look like it's some how floating) and also edit the blood manually (by brushing) to give it depth, the bevel is not enough. I do advise you to look up another blood brush.
- Desaturate everything except the red and go for a black withe red wall. Also enhance the contrast on the photos with a levels adjustment. I think it will give the wall a nice look.
Good luck!^^
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3 years 5 months ago
I tried layering with different options :
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7716/vietsaya0402tg.jpg
Seen you edited your post :
There's 1 entire night and one day that i'm struggling with this blood ...
Anyway, i wanted to not have straight borders in my pictures; so i used ondulation on the white box surrounding pictures (-> why eaten).
About texture, i took a grunge blood font that people told me ... & blue because white was too flashy and i haven't thought of a better color with red under it ...
About the wall (not table), i find a little piece of wood then i constucted the whole wall then made it looks older and worn ...
I'll continue doing what i can ...
Edit : It's blood brushes coming from deviant (author : ASUNDER if i remember well) and i'll look for all other problems ...
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7716/vietsaya0402tg.jpg
Seen you edited your post :
There's 1 entire night and one day that i'm struggling with this blood ...
Anyway, i wanted to not have straight borders in my pictures; so i used ondulation on the white box surrounding pictures (-> why eaten).
About texture, i took a grunge blood font that people told me ... & blue because white was too flashy and i haven't thought of a better color with red under it ...
About the wall (not table), i find a little piece of wood then i constucted the whole wall then made it looks older and worn ...
I'll continue doing what i can ...
Edit : It's blood brushes coming from deviant (author : ASUNDER if i remember well) and i'll look for all other problems ...
#325667 Quote Report Edited by ~Saka4Rob10 3 years 5 months ago
No i don't mean like that..
i mean like differnet layers visible.
so like dark on the bottmo, then maybe ther's a lighter layer of blood not gradientnot higlight. just another brush on top of it with a differnet blending option.
You might wanna compose this better
for example. two big brushes, and some medium bushes, and some brushes.. all the same size is too overwhelming.
also. don't use the same set twice, if you've only dled one set of brushes, you need to go look for more.
probably like 10 or somthing like that.
Good luck.!
can you open this site? http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20284595/
i mean like differnet layers visible.
so like dark on the bottmo, then maybe ther's a lighter layer of blood not gradientnot higlight. just another brush on top of it with a differnet blending option.
You might wanna compose this better
for example. two big brushes, and some medium bushes, and some brushes.. all the same size is too overwhelming.
also. don't use the same set twice, if you've only dled one set of brushes, you need to go look for more.
probably like 10 or somthing like that.
Good luck.!
can you open this site? http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20284595/
3 years 5 months ago
Thank you blu3angl, i downloaded the brushes.
Zenda : i tried auto-contrast but even if it's more visible; there are too much artifacts appearing.
May be trying manually or i don't know what is vectoring but i'll take a look.
Zenda : i tried auto-contrast but even if it's more visible; there are too much artifacts appearing.
May be trying manually or i don't know what is vectoring but i'll take a look.
#325725 Quote Report Edited by ~Saka4Rob10 3 years 5 months ago
Wait! those aren't nearly enough!
go to the search bar at the top of the same page, and type in blood or splatters or something like that and dl whatever you like XD
go to the search bar at the top of the same page, and type in blood or splatters or something like that and dl whatever you like XD