Kiddy Grade
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Okay, I finally made a new wp. Just tell me what you think about it and what can be improved.
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2801/foreverandalways9tl.jpg
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2801/foreverandalways9tl.jpg
Image looks very clean, effects looks great, not too big, not too small, just one question... where did you take the backgroundfrom? LMK PLZ! T_T
the rest is magnificent! - just a suggestion, try adding a low glowing moon to the back!
May I suggest you shift the character to a more central position? And perhaps move them further up a bit, so we can see more of the reflection in the water below? Also, the spiral sparkle thing looks cut off on the right hand side, maybe you can fix that? Maybe changing the blending mode of the spiral sparkles to overlay or soft light would make it look better? Similarly for the font? I think a black blurred stroke/glow blending mode soft light with 50% opacity with white text 100% opacity blending mode soft light may look nice.
Thanks, I'll try the things you said. Oh, I got the bg from stock.xchng. The original was a bit different . I changed the colors and levels of the sky and water and changed the blending mode.
I'd toss out the font. I'm not sure if I'd even bother replacing it with something better though. If you center it a little more like dhias suggested than it won't look as blank on the right side so a font would be unnecessary. Another suggestion is the girl's cheek on the right side has a kind of blurry area. It's just a few pixels that look like they need to be re-cged as her hair color and that area softened lightly to smooth the edge.
Tanks, I took some of the suggestions. I do have some problems with the corner of the swirl, I was wondering if someone had some tips for me on that. I also added the moon and its reflection in the water.
http://img282.imageshack.us/img282/7029/foreverandalways5xi.jpg
http://img282.imageshack.us/img282/7029/foreverandalways5xi.jpg
Hmmm the wall looks really good so far but there are some things I would definitely change. First ditch the sparkle effects and on the text too. It is just way to over used. If you want to add a ??little? bit of mist coming up from the water then I think that would work well. Also in place of the sparkles might I suggest something like the aurora borealis for the sky. Lastly the moon is an ok idea, but right now it does not look all that great. I would grab a stock photo and then play around with it a bit. Hope that helps! Keep up the good work.
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