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Fly... by °Phill  2 months 2 weeks  ago

Fly... by °Phill 2 months 2 weeks ago

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This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.

While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.

ShoutBox

±angel-voice 24 minutes ago
Upps, I'm glad that my boss doesn't have a PC

°akiranyo 26 minutes ago
Hehe. Too bad for us, cause I also work to 17.30 today. Btw gtg now. Boss can come in any second and I'm on his PC.lol

~lildevil8200 26 minutes ago
Wow that sucks angel ...so when do you go home aki?

±angel-voice 29 minutes ago
Haha, me too but I started work. So I need to wait till 5pm before I can go home. So nearly 7 hours to go :(

°akiranyo 30 minutes ago
Feeling tired today. I wanna go home already ;3

±angel-voice 34 minutes ago
Chocolate cake is always good for the mood. How are you aki-chan?

°akiranyo 36 minutes ago
Gald that you liked it, Voicy-sama ;3 *facepalm*

~lildevil8200 36 minutes ago
Ohhhh...well how are you guys?

~thebigfatwhale 37 minutes ago
Bai! *gawn*

±angel-voice 38 minutes ago
Oh, chocolate cake *hugs aki-chan*

My First Wallaper

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~Dapooh
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Topics: 2
Posts: 83
2 years 6 months ago
To me is so funny...
but i think that need something more
i dont know... but
i like the girls :P

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`umboody
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YUI = <3
Topics: 23
Posts: 444
2 years 6 months ago
Haven't you already posted this in a thread before?

Let the original thread do it's work. Apart from some extraction fixes, nothing else has been done as far as I can see. The background doesn't blend in well with the characters, and, to quote mblack in the other thread, "the scans seem to be just slapped onto a simple filtered background."

Nice start, but needs improvement. Ganbatte!

$peepboon
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The White Hawk
Topics: 11
Posts: 126
2 years 6 months ago
The extraction of the images are good but 3 can be too much unless you can arrange them in a way which fits well :P the bkg is a bit too plain too

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~Dragonsminc
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Posts: 57
2 years 6 months ago
No, the extractions are not good... YET... the extractions still need work, I can still see some edges that need help... That real cat still has an area at the back of his tail that needs work...and the paw prints in the corner need help... there are other areas as well especially around elbows and in tucked away corners... like I said before it is a really nice start and it is so cute ^^ but you need to make a main focus so that there is an obvious, palpable, grab and pull feel to this wallpaper. It has more of a background for a wallpaper feel as it is right now. Any way good luck and I think it will be really nifty once you have it all worked out. ^_^

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`Yuki-Yang
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Anxiousness
Topics: 1
Posts: 56
2 years 6 months ago
I think you should do a bit more work on the BG. Pick a style and design it. Like Dragonsminc said, there need to be a main focus and more colors. It's a cute image, I wish you luck.

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θblu3angl
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Moody Lady
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Posts: 3196
2 years 6 months ago
I think maybe a gold color would work better than silver for this one
i haven't seen much gold either so you shoul dtry it out^^

the girl on the left is a little pixelated
but what i don't like is how
the middle girl seems to just stuck her top body out, while the other girls
have full bodys

how does she not have a body? can was the scan like?

C: i hope you will consider^^

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$divStar
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cavalier
Topics: 8
Posts: 76
2 years 6 months ago
Well I can't really complain about the extraction of the characteres, which seems to have been done quite ok.
What bothers me more is the shadow effect behind each of the characters.

It makes the characters appear somehow "flat" and kinda "overlayed" above the "flat" background. So what I would do is take that shadow effect out and rearrange them a little (maybe overlapping each other a little?).
I also would take out that half-transparency out (from the girl to the right for example).

As for the background: it looks a bit too simple. But remember: simple is not always bad, because usually you want the viewer to focus on the foreground. So you have to make the foreground more interesting in order to be able to add a better background. So after rearranging the foreground (into a row maybe?) and letting the characters partly overlap each other, you could try to use some lines in the lower part of the wallpaper (the lines would be parallel to the horizont) - in my opinion a line could cause the wallpaper to look not that random.
You could also use that line in order to write a title there - or a memorizable sentence or whatever you want.

Well - good luck! I hope it works out :)

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~hikaru7
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Fluffy Dragon
Topics: 3
Posts: 9
2 years 6 months ago
This thread can be deleated.
I have another...
http://www.animepaper.net/forums/Session-Zero/22721/
Sorry for the incovenience my computer is having large problems with this sites coding for some reason.