what should i change?
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Hey,
that's also what Kalico write when I submit a wall...
hehehe...
that's also what Kalico write when I submit a wall...
hehehe...
You're missing a signature. The scan is really dull and "washed out" and the background consists of random brushing and blurry screenshots. The text is rather dull and positioning it on top without any snaz to it makes it out of place. Basically you should go crazy and not fit as many screen shots as you can in one wall if you cant incorperate it well. In this case, it looks rather dull and basically not a very interesting wall. I think you should try and find a focus and click around AP for some inspiration. >_<
#228278 Quote Report Edited by `puppychow16 2 years 8 months ago
I'm also!Rukawa11Hey,
that's also what Kalico write when I submit a wall...
hehehe...
It's a dark wall, but the FMA characters in the wall are happy. Mood, tone doesn't match.
2 years 8 months ago
Mee too!! I think he means that its not big enough or something idk...Rukawa11Hey,
that's also what Kalico write when I submit a wall...
hehehe...
*sigh*
^_^
2 years 8 months ago
bal3It's a dark wall, but the FMA characters in the wall are happy. Mood, tone doesn't match.
BINGO. You have this dark mellow setting and right away it ticks off the scan because their happy. The sense of the wall your trying to portray is essentially lost right there, o/f there are the techincal problems as well, but if the scan and the background tone doesnt match, then i dont think you can really start.
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