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Relaxation by °Tens  15 hours 28 minutes  ago

Relaxation by °Tens 15 hours 28 minutes ago

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As an animation, Bakemonogatari has a simple, clean art style. But the guest illustrations for the series are anything but simple! So, it's great to see that °Tens took on a more complex illustration and made it his own with vector gradients so fine at points it more resembles painting that vectoring. Do have a look at this beautiful wallpaper!

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`akiranyo 1 minute ago
Mouton and Tens are miles ahead everyone else in voting XD

~kittylove 14 minutes ago
User posted image i see you....

`Ali3n 16 minutes ago
Rofl! You can buy an electronic cigaret now XD

~kittylove 23 minutes ago
Hey rabbit! whats up man?

`Sashinka 27 minutes ago
Helping poeple is important! ;D

~NosVII 29 minutes ago
Ye, those are very helpfull. I'd say make this group :D I think it will help a lot of people if people can ask for feedback in it

~kittylove 30 minutes ago
User posted image theres a kitten in your pocket!

`Sashinka 36 minutes ago
I was thinking..also..we can made and post tutorials for the beginners!

~NosVII 40 minutes ago
Yes Sashi, angel! plz do

`Sashinka 53 minutes ago
Its so good to make a group for people who want help about painting Anyone agree?!.. =D

What do you guys think of this wallpaper?

~fire-flies
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4 years 1 month ago
I made this one long time ago, uhm.. i am not really good with wall making so i need some suggestion to improve
Also, if i want to submit this wall, under which category should I put it into? The scan was from "are you me" design and its not listed on the category list.
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/yurifireflies/daugtherofeve.jpg
>_< kinda too small i know, but pls bear with me, I have this wall over at my MT site too

#127189 Quote Report Edited by ~fire-flies 4 years 1 month ago

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`Gloo
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4 years 1 month ago
It really IS too small...and that makes it hard to comment on it. I suggest you upload it on other sites like ImageShack since Photobucket resizes your walls sometimes.

Anyway, from what I can see, the background has some spots that are too bright, and it doesn't exactly follow a particular pattern. An abstract background is nice sometimes when it fits, but this one just seems...there. The lighting on the scan isn't bad, though. I just suggest you add more to the background and reduce some of the glare a bit.

It is a pretty nice start. Just fix it up a bit and I'm sure it'll be great :)

#127213 Quote Report Edited by `Gloo 4 years 1 month ago

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~ShinsengumiX
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4 years 1 month ago
The wall is really too small, its hard to comment on it
but from wat i can see, it looks pretty good
the lighting effect is awesome
id like to see the bigger version of this =_=

~fire-flies
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4 years 1 month ago
Gomen..ok heres second try.. +__+ not so good with this, i have my name and my bro's name since he helped me with the wall
http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=daugtherofeve0ll.jpg

#127658 Quote Report Edited by ~fire-flies 4 years 1 month ago

~Rikana
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4 years 1 month ago
Different people have different opinions right? :P. Well to be honest, I think there are some parts too saturated. That's basically all I can think of so far, good attempt though. :)

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`Gloo
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4 years 1 month ago
I'm glad that you made it bigger. Now I can see everything better. Yay :D

Well, first of all, I think that you should take out the bright parts on the left side and at the bottom. I don't see their purpose and they really don't fit in with anything.

I'd suggest that you replace them with something that's more clear and makes more sense. Try to put some of these in the background: mountains, flowers, more stars, grass, trees (or more tree branches)... You don't have to put all of them in there, those are just some suggestions.

Also, remember to make their outlines easy to see. It won't do if people can't tell what an object is supposed to be in your wall.

Hope this helps. It's sweet that your brother's helping you with this ^^

#127671 Quote Report Edited by `Gloo 4 years 1 month ago

~fire-flies
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4 years 1 month ago
Thank you for all of the suggestions.. hum.. well i will try to do my best, not sure how to do all of that tho..
i better look up for some tutorial ^__^' or better yet, call out my brother tehehe.. <-- easier way, he is the best