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ok so i posted this here a while ago asking if it was good enough to get into the gallary and i was told to add more curves and such.

so after some time messing with the pen tool ive gotten the hang of curves(i think)
so naturally i went back and added curves to this one and I think it looks much better then the last one
i was gonna post the old one to compare but i realized i deleted it

so would it get into the gallary now or does it still need work

im aware its probally not the best vector but i still think its pretty good

Ehh. Its not bad. But the black background just enhances its choppy points. If you're going to use a stroke path, use a 1px brush rather then a pencil, because that stops your lines from being choppy too and makes it nice and smooth. Keep trying. :)

Ok cool thanks for the advice
also theres tecchnicly no bg cause its a png

The face has some nice shadow effects and the hair looks decent,
but what's up with her chest. It looks like she's a wounded soldier in the Civil War. Personally I think you should've spent more time on it, or maybe polish it up. It looks sloppy and unfinished IMO. Everything else is looking up to par.