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Relaxation by °Tens  1 day 8 hours  ago

Relaxation by °Tens 1 day 8 hours ago

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As an animation, Bakemonogatari has a simple, clean art style. But the guest illustrations for the series are anything but simple! So, it's great to see that °Tens took on a more complex illustration and made it his own with vector gradients so fine at points it more resembles painting that vectoring. Do have a look at this beautiful wallpaper!

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`akiranyo 44 minutes ago
I have a few vectors in PS still, and wanna finish them.

~NosVII 46 minutes ago
Aki, are you going to use inkscape aswell?

`akiranyo 1 hour 6 minutes ago
Hahaha. I hate that site. A bunch of anonymous people who think that can do anything what they want.

~NosVII 1 hour 12 minutes ago
Q: Why do people use 4chan? I watched it once, but I nearly turned blind.

`akiranyo 1 hour 27 minutes ago
Thnx. Only 1 will be selected tough, and maybe mine :P

~NosVII 1 hour 28 minutes ago
Well you can use mine aswell

*moutonzare 1 hour 33 minutes ago
Lunch time, see you later~

`akiranyo 1 hour 34 minutes ago
MAL - My Anime List

*moutonzare 1 hour 34 minutes ago
@~aki: No Problem :3 @~NOS: I think it's already the case more or less

~NosVII 1 hour 35 minutes ago
Say what?! what is MAL club anyways?

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~Darkenfeathers
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2 years 11 months ago
Well i think it looks really funky how you saved it on gif you should try jpg it would make it clearer looking well good luck

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~kaorux
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2 years 11 months ago
I think that the character looks like she is in the space or something, the backgound seems like the space, galaxies and stars, i dont like that, maybe if you try to make it with less white things that you put in there will look better, and maybe you should try to make the moon and the grass more real, both look weird, the moon has no light and the gras seems like you paint iot and then the paint blew off or something, thats inly my opinion, try to change those things and it will pretty good! mm also put your signature a little bit smaller and put it on the right prt of it but on the borrom part! i think thats it! youve got a good start!
hope this helps!* good luck!*:)

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*zazou8888
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2 years 11 months ago
O_O

Why did you make two threads about almost the same wall? If you have two version for one wall you put both in the same thread and ask which one is the best. No need to have two threads speaking about the same stuff!

But definitely this one looks bad and is poor quality.

You should ask a mod to close this thread.

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`halcyonTwilight
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2 years 11 months ago
The grass blur almost certainly has to go...it's a bit too distracting, and it isn't doing much to enhance the wall at any rate. The stars and planets can be softer...try duplicating the stars layer, slightly blurring it, and changing the layer properties to something such as soft light or screen, then lowering the opacity. It'll look better that way.

You sure picked a hard scan to work with...the reason why I said that is because of the lighting on the girl makes it so that you have to match the lighting to the rest of the wall. Try and see if you can create some light to shine on the leaves so she blends in better. But other than that keep up the good work ^^