Kimiko-chan holiday wallpaper
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Alright posting this is session zero for trismugistus to look at, if anyone else wants to comment as well go ahead.
I personally don't see anythig wrong with the wallpaper, the quality is good, the background goes well with the character, and ...everything else I wrote in that reply to trismugistus XD *i really don't feel like re-typing all of it*
Background info for those who don't know:
-This is my original character Kimiko-chan
-This was hand drawn on the computer with a mouse, don't critique the lines, they are meant to be that way, its called a style.
-Textures taken from: http://mayang.com/textures/
A really good texture website :3
Ehm any other questions just ask, anyways here's the wallpaper:
http://kimiko-chan.diinoweb.com/files/Wallpapers/My%20Wallpapers/Holiday%20Kimiko-chan%21_1024.jpg
I personally don't see anythig wrong with the wallpaper, the quality is good, the background goes well with the character, and ...everything else I wrote in that reply to trismugistus XD *i really don't feel like re-typing all of it*
Background info for those who don't know:
-This is my original character Kimiko-chan
-This was hand drawn on the computer with a mouse, don't critique the lines, they are meant to be that way, its called a style.
-Textures taken from: http://mayang.com/textures/
A really good texture website :3
Ehm any other questions just ask, anyways here's the wallpaper:
http://kimiko-chan.diinoweb.com/files/Wallpapers/My%20Wallpapers/Holiday%20Kimiko-chan%21_1024.jpg
#492666 Quote Report Edited by $kristina1234u 2 years 11 months ago
2 years 11 months ago
I'm not sure that fan-art can't be submitted on AP... Or at least not in the gallery...
The texturing is really interesting but what is the purpose of it in a Christmas wallpaper? I don't really see the connection between this red and the blue you use...
The font is a bit hard to read but it's more a matter of taste...
For me this wall is pretty eye hurting... This blue is way too bright...
The font also is a bit too bright.
And if the ball is a Christmas ball it needs to have a gold attach somewhere...
Is it normal that the outlines are finishing too soon? on the back and on the right arm...
But anyway the drawing part is pretty interesting! ;)
Good luck and Merry Christmas! :p
The texturing is really interesting but what is the purpose of it in a Christmas wallpaper? I don't really see the connection between this red and the blue you use...
The font is a bit hard to read but it's more a matter of taste...
For me this wall is pretty eye hurting... This blue is way too bright...
The font also is a bit too bright.
And if the ball is a Christmas ball it needs to have a gold attach somewhere...
Is it normal that the outlines are finishing too soon? on the back and on the right arm...
But anyway the drawing part is pretty interesting! ;)
Good luck and Merry Christmas! :p
Unfortunately, I think it can be submitted as it's wall made from your original art work, and not from an anime scan. I may be wrong, but I do know that a friend of mine here had their wallpaper removed for that reason.
Other than that though perhaps you need to add a bit more to the wall other than a simple background texture. What would look really nice is some snow, or perhaps some sparkles. And as for your signature, it would be awesome if you made it a bit smaller and less bright.
Hmmm...as for the text, try a easier to read font. I really like the style, but it's a tad too hard to read heh. Other than that it's really impressive that you drew that :) Heaven knows that I can barely draw stick figures XD
Other than that though perhaps you need to add a bit more to the wall other than a simple background texture. What would look really nice is some snow, or perhaps some sparkles. And as for your signature, it would be awesome if you made it a bit smaller and less bright.
Hmmm...as for the text, try a easier to read font. I really like the style, but it's a tad too hard to read heh. Other than that it's really impressive that you drew that :) Heaven knows that I can barely draw stick figures XD
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