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FMA Wallpaper-Riza's Licence to Kill
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2 years 10 months ago
This is actually my second shot at a Bond scope themed wallpaper. The last one was used Nene Ramonova from the original Bubblegum Crisis, but I couldn't get it too look right. But now I've started over from scratch with Riza Hawkeye this time around:
In the words of Joel Robinson, what do you think, sirs?
In the words of Joel Robinson, what do you think, sirs?
2 years 10 months ago
Well the concept is pretty nice but you have some big jaggy lines problems all around the character and also on the blood prat on the top...
By the way this blood doesn't really look good ... You should probably remove it and try to add some James Bond style text... Just to fill up the space and also to give to the wall this sort of advertising poster look...
The smoke of the gun isn't working... You should make it smoother and also more like cigarette smoke if you see what I mean... More grey on the edges and lighter in the middle...
For me a James Bond style wall needs more classical color than the blue we can see... on her hearing and on her pence... You should try to change the color... But as far as it is a vector it shouldn't be too hard! :)
Good luck.
By the way this blood doesn't really look good ... You should probably remove it and try to add some James Bond style text... Just to fill up the space and also to give to the wall this sort of advertising poster look...
The smoke of the gun isn't working... You should make it smoother and also more like cigarette smoke if you see what I mean... More grey on the edges and lighter in the middle...
For me a James Bond style wall needs more classical color than the blue we can see... on her hearing and on her pence... You should try to change the color... But as far as it is a vector it shouldn't be too hard! :)
Good luck.
I come here in peace...
Or not...
:D
I believe that you wanted to make something similar to this… can that the image helps you of reference. but I like the idea, n_n v
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/Cowboy-BeBop/item44177/
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/Cowboy-BeBop/item44177/
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2 years 10 months ago
Wooowww is very good *0*
style 007 I like a lot you should not change nothing
style 007 I like a lot you should not change nothing
- You should try adding some shadows to the scan... or you could try using the same concept that yuriarrow2 mentioned of a similar wallpaper. And yeap, it's definetively a good idea.
We are the Earth Intruders...
With our feet thumbing,
With our feet marching,
Grinding the skeptics into the soil.
Funny, you tried to do it in a james bond way ^o^
"My wings have now forgotten how to fly because I have always just pretended to flap. Is there a use for wings that cannot fly?"
Another way you could approach this wall is if you vector Riza into a back and white vector, so the whole wall would be black and white. This way you wouldn't have to worry about color, and it would look pretty stylish overall. But if you're going to stick with the colored version here, I agree that the smoke and blood should be removed. In addition, the drop shadow you added on Riza doesn't really do much, and will probably look better if it isn't there. Nice work over all though. Good luck on finishing the wall ^^
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