What do you think?
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Good, ps I believe that you must work but… in everything… so that you do not change of idea?
2 years 10 months ago
The text is very awkward for me to read. I'm also not sure about the layout. It doesn't really work for me since it leaves so much black space.
It seems that the scan that you're using isn't of high quality. I'd hate to say this, but perhaps you should find another scan to work on. But if you do find a higher quality version of this scan, one thing you could work on is the text. Having too much text is something that is generally looked down upon, so try to limit it to a few words. Also, perhaps picking another color, such as white, would work better than red for the text color.
Thanks for the advice. I'll have to work on it some more. . .I'll repost when I've improved.
Err i press the link and it take me in your your photobucket acc o.o;;; you should't do that people will be able to delete things
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