__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
magna carta
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Please tell me what you think of my wallpaper? This is my very first one. I am not very good but this is the best one I have done.
#529236 Quote Report Edited by ~starrynight12369 2 years 9 months ago
"My wings have now forgotten how to fly because I have always just pretended to flap. Is there a use for wings that cannot fly?"
Is nice, I like the colors, I alway like red, but maybe the left side are very dark to me… I don´t know what you can do with this, but is only my opinion, good luck! =D
2 years 10 months ago
It would look better without the white glowing outline, but that's the only thing I would change about it. Good work.
Overall a nice looking wall. I agree with the others that the white outline doesn't really belong. But other than that, the only other thing I see that can be improved is the orange lights you have on the left side of the wall. They look pretty basic and out of place compared to all the detailed effects on the right side. Perhaps making them smaller and a bit brighter would make them look much better.
I like your concept there, and yes the white outline is out of place, the character don't really blend with the bg, can you make it that the char is like walking in the flames? well just a suggestion. I can't fully view your wall, so i can't comment that much, when i click the thumbnail, it leads to www.imageshack.us only. i hope you can change it so that i can fully view it.
(^o^)V
-Jane
(^o^)V
-Jane
C.O.M.P.L.I.C.A.T.E.D
Your wall is really nice...but i also agree with them about the white outline around the char....and also i can't see it clearly because when i click the thumbnail, it leads me to imageshack web site not to your wall....>_<...and by the way, thanks for your comments to my wall....^^...
This post has been filtered for improved legibility #529599 Quote Report Edited by ~Ai-chan 2 years 10 months ago
2 years 10 months ago
Hi there!
please check out the thrumbnail link.. cause i can't fully view the wall... so i can't give you a good and critic comment for improving it...
anyway... what i can see from here is that you need to get rid of that white glowing thing around the character... and try to work some more on the background cause everything looks a little messy... i think you should give some directions to the stuff you have put there... and organize things a bit more so that it won't look too coffusing..
hope this helps! :)
wish you luck..
kisses!!
please check out the thrumbnail link.. cause i can't fully view the wall... so i can't give you a good and critic comment for improving it...
anyway... what i can see from here is that you need to get rid of that white glowing thing around the character... and try to work some more on the background cause everything looks a little messy... i think you should give some directions to the stuff you have put there... and organize things a bit more so that it won't look too coffusing..
hope this helps! :)
wish you luck..
kisses!!
Sorry, I forgot to put the link to the bigger picture. Please have a look at it again. Sorry for the inconvenience
"My wings have now forgotten how to fly because I have always just pretended to flap. Is there a use for wings that cannot fly?"
The fire effect is quite nice but i dunno why there is a tree on it?
otherwise i think the white outerglow is useless, i advise you to remove it
otherwise i think the white outerglow is useless, i advise you to remove it
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