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<*OLD ONE*To much time has passed to lament that me were deeply in love.... i have gotten to where i am now with this wall with the help of BLU my bestest sister *luv*
and gat....
so now here it is in SZ ..what do you think ?
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newest one > NEWEST ONE
ok i changed the curtens and darken up the room turning it back to that deep blue tone...
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LET THE VOTING BEGIN
and gat....
so now here it is in SZ ..what do you think ?
***************EDITED**************
newest one > NEWEST ONE
ok i changed the curtens and darken up the room turning it back to that deep blue tone...
V.1- texture # 1
V.2- texture # 2
V.3- no texture # 3
go to page 3 for the last 2 versions
LET THE VOTING BEGIN
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2 years 1 month ago
I remember this wallpaper : before julia was in the other side with a town behind.
Am i wrong ?
Anyway, the wallpaper looks good and good job; there's only 2 things bugging ma :
1) the left character on the left picture seem contrasting too much with others
2) the part of the table at right more illuminated looks weird
Hope it helps.
Good luck.
Am i wrong ?
Anyway, the wallpaper looks good and good job; there's only 2 things bugging ma :
1) the left character on the left picture seem contrasting too much with others
2) the part of the table at right more illuminated looks weird
Hope it helps.
Good luck.
ok i did
yep your right rob it is that one...do you like it better now ?
yep your right rob it is that one...do you like it better now ?
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YAY squidy!! 
33
looks wondiiful
a few things...
What happened to the curtain's shadow on the table? it's impossible to have the window frame's shadow on the table but not the curtains x3
2. about the shadow, it's all lookin really nice, except for one thing. mayb ei explained this wrong before, or you dind't fix it. but anyways,
for the lowest rim/bar/for window/ it should be light dark medium. not light medium dark like that you have now.
do you get it.
on the lowest window frame bar. from top to bottom, the coloring should be : lightest, darkest, gradiation from dark to medium.. I can show you if you don't get it still :D
3. darken the picture and frame. wayy too bright there. and it'll be nice to get that go from dark to light. from left to right. you know, to show the lighting. although there shouldn't be too much difference, just a bit.
4. i liked the outside buildings, and now, it's too hard to see them. i suggest lighten up outside a little bit towards your light version. maybe lighten up the table just a tweaky bit too.
nice ne!
PS. started writing this right when you posted, so didn't see the updated version xp
33looks wondiiful
a few things...
What happened to the curtain's shadow on the table? it's impossible to have the window frame's shadow on the table but not the curtains x3
2. about the shadow, it's all lookin really nice, except for one thing. mayb ei explained this wrong before, or you dind't fix it. but anyways,
for the lowest rim/bar/for window/ it should be light dark medium. not light medium dark like that you have now.
do you get it.
on the lowest window frame bar. from top to bottom, the coloring should be : lightest, darkest, gradiation from dark to medium.. I can show you if you don't get it still :D
3. darken the picture and frame. wayy too bright there. and it'll be nice to get that go from dark to light. from left to right. you know, to show the lighting. although there shouldn't be too much difference, just a bit.
4. i liked the outside buildings, and now, it's too hard to see them. i suggest lighten up outside a little bit towards your light version. maybe lighten up the table just a tweaky bit too.
nice ne!
PS. started writing this right when you posted, so didn't see the updated version xp
2 years 1 month ago
Great job! ^___^
For critiques, not much, but I can see two tings:
- It looks kinda out of place that the shadows on her hair are so much darker than the wall. So I'd think about making it darker to the left with it working up to the brightness level it's at as it gets close to the window/moon light source. That would look more convincing.
- The show of the drape on the table. If it's so dark there, there would be a part of the shadow on the wall between it and the table. I'd guess downplaying the drape's show on the table by a lot would work best, but that's only a guess ^_^;
Anyway, nice going, and I hope I could help out some :)
For critiques, not much, but I can see two tings:
- It looks kinda out of place that the shadows on her hair are so much darker than the wall. So I'd think about making it darker to the left with it working up to the brightness level it's at as it gets close to the window/moon light source. That would look more convincing.
- The show of the drape on the table. If it's so dark there, there would be a part of the shadow on the wall between it and the table. I'd guess downplaying the drape's show on the table by a lot would work best, but that's only a guess ^_^;
Anyway, nice going, and I hope I could help out some :)
But blu i did put the curens shadow there , its just a bit tranparent (cuz the curten is )
*waaaah*
*waaaah*
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Guess i'm too late... its perfect IMO but then again i'm a noob so it doesnt really matter...and those guys give great advice...i'm learning with you also
Really? *waks computer*
i guess it's my computer's screen display then
because the table was way too dark for me to see anything x3 so i couldn't tell
i guess it's my computer's screen display then
because the table was way too dark for me to see anything x3 so i couldn't tell
Wow, nice job! The only thing is that compared to everything else in the room the curtain's style clashes. Everything else looks very realistic while the curtain looks like a quick doodle that you made. Change that and I'd say you're ready to submit!
Yeah your right about the curtens , at first i liked them but i think that there really starting to drag the wall down.
and i just saw that the table seems to have some weird streaking weirdness all over it..i think thats what rob was saying before *silly me*
i'll be back soon (tomarow) with the changes
and i just saw that the table seems to have some weird streaking weirdness all over it..i think thats what rob was saying before *silly me*
i'll be back soon (tomarow) with the changes
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Oh by the way i will not have any time to get to this till at least late tonight, so you guys can still comment on it...in fact please do ....COMMENT
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It's really nice, and the bg looks great. I don't really like how it's all dark, but i guess it was made that way. I don't see your signature on there, and it'd be a really good idea to put it on there.
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i wanted it all dark like there was no lights exept for the moon , but i'm having truble with that..the way i darken it seems to distroy the table and her coat...but i havent fownd another way to do it...
i wanted it all dark like there was no lights exept for the moon , but i'm having truble with that..the way i darken it seems to distroy the table and her coat...but i havent fownd another way to do it...
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:O that's a hot wallpaper!
beautiful!! I say add your signature and submit it ;)
uhm I just noticed there's a white piece of paper that stands out a bit too much...you should make it darker >.O
but that's the only thing ^___^ good luck with submission!
beautiful!! I say add your signature and submit it ;)
uhm I just noticed there's a white piece of paper that stands out a bit too much...you should make it darker >.O
but that's the only thing ^___^ good luck with submission!
Thanks im going to go finish it now..i was going to put it off till tonight but i'm going to be working so i must do it now......i have been working on this for so long i just want to finish it and get it away from me....and the layers in it are about to crash my comp....
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