cybil

Thank you so much hillshireweeps n_n
And thanks to all of you , I'll try make it again n_n

That sounds like a lot of work. You don't mean you're going to redo the entire thing, do you?

I made two with differnets moons Oo!! and i added that thing in the building n_n" ... Here's one :
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f114/cybil2006/wall1.jpg
And here's another one :
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f114/cybil2006/wall2.jpg
Which one is better and is it good thing that i added in the building ?

The moon is too big in the second one, way too big. I'd really like the first one, but the moon is still just a little too big, I think.

The glow around the city turned out good, eh? ^_^

hillshireweeps

The moon is too big in the second one, way too big. I'd really like the first one, but the moon is still just a little too big, I think.

I thought it'll be better if i make the moon bog But it's seems not n_n"
Anyways What should i make next n_n ?

hillshireweeps

The glow around the city turned out good, eh? ^_^

I don't know is it good ? I like it but i don't know about you guys n_n"

Stars are appearing in front of the moon in both cases which is not a physical possibility (not without everything becoming incinerated anyways).

Compositionally the moon is better placed in the first image.

Lightingwise I get the impression that the original scan was in daytime conditions. You may wish to adjust the flare and backlighting present on the car to suit nighttime and consider introducing a reason for the characters to be lit as they are.

Hmmm, i like the moon at the center but like what hillshireweeps its too big cy, you can make it smaller and put it a litle at the top i guess. and i also like the first^^ really nice^^. but i like the other one.^^

hatesyou

Stars are appearing in front of the moon in both cases which is not a physical possibility (not without everything becoming incinerated anyways).
Compositionally the moon is better placed in the first image.
Lightingwise I get the impression that the original scan was in daytime conditions. You may wish to adjust the flare and backlighting present on the car to suit nighttime and consider introducing a reason for the characters to be lit as they are.

Yep it was Day time in the original scan n_n"
Ok thanks Hates I'll try the flare n_n

myangelnoli

hmmm, i like the moon at the center but like what hillshireweeps its too big cy, you can make it smaller and put it a litle at the top i guess. and i also like the first^^ really nice^^. but i like the other one.^^

Now .. Can you tell what should i name it ? I mean the Font of course n_n"

Hmm about the shooting star, well i think your almost finish and wouldn't bother putting it in, but anyway. For the shooting star i think all you need to do is draw a line and gaussian blur it. I think that'll make it look like a shooting star.

Oh and about the font: I suggest a cursive font. i think that'll match the scenery. I love the buildings now! incredible!

Hmmm...the font huh...do you want love-love font? Or do you want some...uh...fashionable font?

If its not too late to make a suggestion...

I really like the idea of putting some lights in the city and adding a glow to the horizon above the buldings. I would work on that in fine detail. If you wanted to put a moon, I would suggest putting a low contrast crecent moon (Large) coming up right at the horizon on the right side of city.

shinra-soldi3r

hmm about the shooting star, well i think your almost finish and wouldn't bother putting it in, but anyway. For the shooting star i think all you need to do is draw a line and gaussian blur it. I think that'll make it look like a shooting star.
Oh and about the font: I suggest a cursive font. i think that'll match the scenery. I love the buildings now! incredible!

Ok thanks Shinra n_n

MooMooCow1314

Hmmm...the font huh...do you want love-love font? Or do you want some...uh...fashionable font?

I want a font that suit this wall n_n"

ddavis1979

If its not too late to make a suggestion...
I really like the idea of putting some lights in the city and adding a glow to the horizon above the buldings. I would work on that in fine detail. If you wanted to put a moon, I would suggest putting a low contrast crecent moon (Large) coming up right at the horizon on the right side of city.

No it's not too late i'm still waiting for more suggestions n_n"
Thanks alot Davis n_n

Hmmm i somehow knew you'd shoot that back to me..

Well, try the font Pristina or Tagettes. If you don't have them, go to The Resource Pool and under that HUGE list of sites posted by Lord...Yosho or something, click Dafont.com (okay <<<) and search for either of them (can't remember did i get it from there...)

Hope this can help thou.

Ok the wall is Done And thanks to all of you n_n
I've redraw the car again and i make the characters to fit with
the BG (( Night time )) I've changed their colors ... Oh Yeah and about the moon
I colored it from inside to make it looks good and i make it a little smaller , And about the sky i make it more darker ..
(( And about adding a shooting star .. I tried but i couldn't u_u" ))
I think i finished the wallpaper n_n
But about the font i tried but i don't think it's important in this wall Cuz when i put the
font the wall looks wierd Oo
So do like it with \ without the font ?
I actully prefer it without font n_n (( And when i submit it I'll write [ Seduction under the night sky ] in the title))
So what do you think ?
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f114/cybil2006/Wallpaper.jpg

I love the completed version, very nice. Darkening the whole thing actually kinda gives me a better feel of the romance between the two. As for the text, i don't know, you could place it at the lower right or something...of course, its all up to you.

Anyhow, good job.

Wow i love the completed version! I agree with Moomoochow that it does give off that sense of romance. About the title maybe put it in the lower right corner? That seems empty. Yeah! Seduction Under The Night Sky sounds great! In my opinion i thinks its good to go and submit it! But yeah thats my opinion. Maybe just wait for other's confimation... just to be on the safe side.