To see…. first that nothing I salute to you. second .... to my first impression I pleasure to me…. but later I saw things that I did not like
1º: the point orange that to tapaar the legs of one of the participants…. but good as you modified this good…
2º if it is my PC or the Wall but I do not erase something by a very good flank .....
wall men greetings something but….
I want to learn to do wall " s but they do not leave to me….ay some tutorial to do them

The ball is OK, the mountain isnt that good
the sea is quite confuse now, maybe less waves will be better

Oops I forgot to check I still see a small white spot on the lower right corner? Am I wrong?

and blue oceans: the further towards the horizon, the darker the blue. that's because of water depth you see. but it looks okay as is, though the white is a touch much.

It'll be darker, but less saturated as well. Colors in the distance tend to fade.

Things I've fixed:
1) Resized the ball so that the focus will be more on the girls than the ball. Redrew more of the legs to compensate for that.
2) Modified the sea by removing the waves and tried blending it in with the sky
3) Fixed the vector in some places. I tried to fix all the flaws mentioned (although I must admit I didn't find all of them)
4) Redrew the whole mountain from scratch. It's still a bit blurry, but it's entirely original and hopefully better than previously.
5) Added in pages to the book. :)

Things yet to be done:
1) TEXT (Yes, I KNOW! Stop harping on it already >.<)
2) Wind?
3) Sparkle of water?
4) Whatever else you think can make it improve.

Let me know if I changed it for worse this time around cos I know it happens sometimes. =/

Here's the wall: